This was a very well thought out and well written story. I enjoyed reading it.

I love how you end with her saying goodnight Loki or god of mischief and he responds with sleep well every time they sleep

Wow just awesome, man really touched my heart

I'm crying noooo I have to know more . will they ever be together .?.

I like the story, I like the way you write Loki and that its progressing in a nice way, not to fast, not to slow, not in a weird way. This far Penny is satisfactory, she seems reasonable and real.
And at the part where Penny is showed the maps you accidently wrote Tom instead of Todd.
Oh and the kiss was wonderfull, just right not to much. And Penny remind me more of my sister than me so shes not my prefered oc but shes nice, easy to like, my sister lacks the sensible part that Penny posess. ;)

Omg I loved the friendship fangirling in this chapterXD great job, keep writing!

Oi! How in the seven bloody hells is his "complete"?! No! No, you finish this before I cry! .

Awwwwww!
I was expecting him to ditch everything and be with her.
But i guess this is better that way they can go to asgard together after loki settles things with his family.

Thank you for all the 90s references.

You did not just do that.

YOU. DID. NOT. JUST. DO. THAT.

good story anyway; that ending gave me so much feelz. Keep up the awesome work!

I'm odd for saying eggs and bacon instead of bacon and eggs? Maybe it's a location thing? And yes, this is my second time reading this. I still like the baseball bat touch.

Boo, had to end it on a cliff hanger, didn't you? Better update soon!

Ahhhh! This spike conversation killed me! I love it. I am Penny in this chapter

I want a boyfriend who can make money appear out of thin air.

Yes. Yes. The baseball bat. Yes.