|Reviews for Roses are Red|
| hervissa chapter 1 . 12/16/2012
Great poem. Siriusly ;)
| mistressinwaiting chapter 1 . 4/2/2012
Very beautiful! Beautiful twist on the classic poem! I enjoyed it very mcuh!
| obsessivegirl73 chapter 1 . 8/7/2011
Yeah, I can imagine Bella writing that. :) nice job. Looks like I'll be going on a review break again, I'm going to see a baseball game! :D (finally. my softball schedule has prevented me from seeing games this summer... :P) I'll review again later, today and/or tomorrow. XD
| Zeus on the Loose chapter 1 . 8/5/2011
That was actually a really good poem. Not too dark, but definitely not all lovey-dovey.
| insert random comment here chapter 1 . 6/22/2011
your poetry is really good!
| TellatrixForever chapter 1 . 5/20/2011
This is a wonderful piece of poetry. Not bad at all. I could definitely see a young Bellatrix writing this, before the madness perhaps.
| Mebina Sobriquet chapter 1 . 5/20/2011
This is a lovely piece, but sometimes your scan is a little off- try going for a specific metre or rhythm pattern to improve the power of each line and each stanza as a whole. Good job though :) MS
| Thanatos Angelos Girl chapter 1 . 5/18/2011
I enjoyed this. I liked the fact that it sounded like a younger version of her would say and the fact that she contridicts herself and admits she does. I also like how she shows how grim she is by saying "roses remind me of blood not love". This is great and it is a excerpt to the future Bella that we have come to known.
| helotastic chapter 1 . 5/17/2011
aww, pretty cute!
the only thing I'd watch out for is that the syllables are off in some places.
Otherwise, great job!