Reviews for The Bully
Swallow-Tailed Kite chapter 1 . 5/23/2011
not a bad story. :D
Sarah1281 chapter 1 . 5/18/2011
I don't quite understand why Michael was so obsessed with tracking down Tobias that he'd resort to stalking (or how he managed to follow Tobias to Cassie's barn as he presumably flew). Is his self-worth really that tied up in tormenting Tobias? How ever did he get by when Tobias was missing? Also, Cassie seems a bit misinformed. Just because there CAN be guided tours of her place doesn't mean that it's impossible to trespass. Michael clearly did not sign up for a guided tour and was not invited or wanted (and is sneaking about!) so therefore is trespassing. That said, I do like the idea of Tobias facing a ghost of his past and realizing that he's moved past it. Michael really should have realized that whatever Tobias was up to when he was gone, he's clearly a lot tougher now and not easy prey and done the smart thing and found somebody else. Well, I guess he will now.