Reviews for Kulpo
DELETEDFOREVERCENTURY chapter 1 . 6/4/2021
Damn commander - you wrote Doof and Vanessa's relationship incredibly well. This makes the both of them much more complex and sympathetic characters than they are in canon, and yet is still completely true to both of them.
Fives stars Commander - this is canon to me now.
Carol Molliniere chapter 1 . 9/10/2016
Such a good fanfiction. This is one of the best I have read, with everyone in character,
Lucyole chapter 1 . 1/4/2013
that was really a good story i like that
anon chapter 1 . 7/13/2012
Wow, what a headtrip. Very well executed.
Thunderstone chapter 1 . 1/9/2012
This was so heartwarming and you've really nailed the dynamic between the two. He may be evil, but the Doc does mean well when it comes to his daughter and I think Vanessa knows this

Nice work :)
LittlePlagueSpirit chapter 1 . 1/2/2012
Wow, I must say that this is one of the best father-daughter stories that I have read so far.

Doofenshmirtz is perfectly in character, with his anger towards Vanessa, his daily fight with Perry and his sadness about his past and about his son (at that point my heart broke). You have portrayed Vanessa also very well as the stubborn teengage girl with her own mindset, who does what she wants but can't stop caring for her dad, how much he annoys her.

A wonderful story and very well written. Great work! :)
the sudoku kid chapter 1 . 11/24/2011
I like how Doofenshmirtz tries so hard to make his daughter happy. I feel so bad for Doofenshmirtz having lost his son the way he did. Keep up the good work.
BJXCBFOREVER chapter 1 . 10/24/2011
Aw! That was so sweet! My favourite part was when they fought over who Perry should twart! Got me laughing so much! Great story! :D
Pink Wolf Princess chapter 1 . 9/14/2011
They're so adorable...

One heck of a line: "Hey, don't push your luck. If he can build robots he can probably build some sort of force field around this place that'll keep you stuck here."

PoisonousAngel chapter 1 . 8/31/2011
Very, very sweet, and very, very good. I loved everything. Perfect job. :D
Inumaru12 chapter 1 . 8/29/2011
Awww, this was so sweet and the way you did the parent/daughter interaction was perfectly on sync. Great, great job!

AnimationNut chapter 1 . 8/11/2011
:D What can I say? Doofenschmirtz was potrayed perfectly, you got Vanessa's attitude spot on, the yelling match between father and daughter was intense and the ending was so sweet! The bit where Perry just stands there and Vanessa goes, "Thwart him Perry the Platypus!" is hilarious!

Terrific job! I LOVE this :D
Sringer0 chapter 1 . 7/28/2011
Awwwww, so fucking touching!
bookwyrm.the chapter 1 . 7/17/2011
This is so sweet! You need to write another Vanessa and Doofenshmirtz story! I will definitely read it!
MidnightWritings chapter 1 . 6/23/2011
This story is FANTASTIC! :D You really did a great job. You captured Doofenshmirtz amazingly :D
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