Reviews for In Between Crime and Punishment
Ina Twilight chapter 11 . 12/14/2011
I'm looking forward to reading next chapter. Update soon xxx
Ina Twilight chapter 8 . 12/14/2011
My favorite chapter. You have so much talent. This fanfic rocks. Just love your Edward :) Your story definitely is worthy of more reviews. Keep the good work!
rocklesson86 chapter 11 . 12/8/2011
I love the new chapter and I can't wait for the next one.
pnkats chapter 11 . 12/8/2011
Hmm so maybe James is the guilty one. Wonder when Bella will start giving in to Edwards advances?
pnkats chapter 10 . 11/7/2011
Oh I would love an Edwards pov! It sure is taking Bella a lot of time to warm up to Edward. I hope she will eventually though. She will won't she? Great chapter. Good luck on your paper
samypamy chapter 10 . 11/6/2011
Very well written, can't wait till the next chapter.
rocklesson86 chapter 10 . 11/6/2011
Very interesting story. Please keep up the good work.
soccershadow3 chapter 10 . 11/6/2011
Interesting story so far. I like it! Can't wait to see what happens.
mrt123 chapter 9 . 10/21/2011
Love your story so far but

i would like longer chapters

please update soon
Foour chapter 6 . 10/20/2011
I'm loving the fanfic!

I would love to Bella and Edward begin a relationship with many Lemmons and PossesiveWard. - LUV THAT
pnkats chapter 9 . 10/20/2011
Oh Edward is so mysterious. What is his deal. Oh but I still love him! Sorry RL has gotten in the way for you. Hope it gets better.
JasperWhitlockIsTheStud chapter 8 . 9/20/2011
Hot hot hot!

OhMyGee I LOVE THIS STORY ! especially the whole suspense part and how edward's identity being hidden..(the medicine talk)

Damn the whole "you're mine" was :O I'm taking edward isn't a killer because well maybe he is mentally depressed but normal yet has his moments..

Anyway please update :D )
Darkangel0470 chapter 8 . 9/20/2011
Brilliant but i dont think she will give in yet, afterall in her mind he is still a suspect. Stands up, takes a deep breath and in a clear voice annouces to the group, i have twitter :D
randomfan17 chapter 8 . 9/20/2011
Interesting, but you really need to transition better between one scene and another, just throw in a sentence saying she's somewhere else, it would help. I liked this chapter, Edward was way more forward this time though why he wants her is still a mystery. Please keep writing, your good but that transition is jarring.
pnkats chapter 8 . 9/20/2011
Glad things have settled down for you. As far as bella giving in to Edward I know I would! Hope she does soon too.
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