|Reviews for Amber Version|
| iixorijuos chapter 1 . 7/5/2011
You should continue this story
| Tomaz chapter 2 . 7/4/2011
I like the story concept, and the chance to take a closer look and flesh out Kamitsure's characterization.
But, I feel that the story's a little short and some description could be improved.
That said, please continue to write; you've got a good thing here.
| partner555 chapter 3 . 5/21/2011
When I read this, it seems like the story is moving slowly with no build-up too exciting or dramatic stuff. You might want to fix that but like I said before, I'm not the best guy to listen to for constructive criticism.
| partner555 chapter 1 . 5/18/2011
I am not going to say that I am the best guy to answer your question but I will say that your beginning is interesting and I really would like to see you continue what I'm pretty sure is a Burgh/Elesa story.