Reviews for Memories
Late to the Party chapter 1 . 2/27/2012
I can only echo what others have already said; this is a wonderful bit of prose. You’ve really climbed into what might be running through Jaheria’s head, and found her ‘voice’. The history – the hints between them – the numbness, the rawness – brilliant. And in so few words!

Really enjoyable piece.

Avenel chapter 1 . 8/13/2011
Ohh...this is so simple, but so brutally effective. I couldn't imagine what it would be like to be in Jaheira's head when she first sees Khalid's body, and then be thrust back into her memories, and to think of their never-conceived son and daughter. Utterly sad and heart-wrenching.
Blue-Inked Frost chapter 1 . 5/18/2011
I left a comment on deviantArt in my name there that I liked this one-short and very effective. Khalid is such a good character, and his and jaheira's story is so tragic. A lot of emotion in this one. Thanks for posting it here; this site is a good one for archiving fic and I really like reading and reviewing stories here. :)