Reviews for Choke
DominaEcca chapter 20 . 11/10/2014
I really enjoy this story; it's a nice blend of humor and seriousness. I usually don't care much for SuFin Fics because they all make Finland out to be, I don't know, childish? But the way he's portrayed here is refreshingly complex. Also, let me just say that I like that you wanted to write about a darker type of fetish. Even among writers it's always seemed like a taboo subject, but I feel like you breach it nicely and shine a more complete light on it. Very well done. :)
42BTomBakerStreet chapter 3 . 8/11/2014
Wow. Just wow. Rereadung this story. Its so amazing how you manage to capture Tino's troubles
OMGjustinbeiberunicornprincess chapter 11 . 6/27/2014
(Please ignore my username, it was a joke. I promise I'm not some insane 8 year old or anything XD Also I'm just gonna refer to the characters by their country names cause that's what I normally do anyway)
I've really been enjoying this story so far and I really love the nordics. Like, alot. I especially like how you portrayed Norway and Denmark. I laugh everytime they show up. You have no idea how much I love how you did Poland too. If I love the nordics, I ADORE Poland and I think you did him justice. All I'm gonna say is MORE POLAND.
More Poland and this will probably the best fan fic I've ever read XD
bia-douwata-13 chapter 20 . 6/21/2014
Can I hug you? This fanfic was one of the bests I've ever read. You know what? The descriptions. Although this was a highly disfunctional relationship, you wrote it perfectly - it wasn't some magic "love conquers all", but the end had a major growing out on your characters. This is probably my favorite SuFin fanfiction. I've been touched by the most of the story. I felt so bad about Fin and about Su too... I'm in no place to say that I understand him nor any of the characters, but I had a fair share of problems too. This fic was... Hurtfully great? I need the right adjective for it, but I can find it. Yeah, bugger. You're great, this is awesome and thank you, thank you so much for writing it.
MidnightOtaku chapter 20 . 6/10/2014
Okay, so, usually I don't like to read really long (20 chapters) fanfictions, but when I read the title and the lines from the actual fanfiction itself, I thought I'd give it a try. The first few chapters (from 1 to 10) I thought I'd give up soon and carry on with my life.

I was wondering to myself, "Now, what does Choke have to do with anything?" Then, I started getting ideas; then I realized what this was about. Things for me got really interesting, so then I kept reading, which was when Tino wanted Berwald to choke him. Then, it hit me, "So THAT'S why it's called Choke!" This was honestly the best Hetalia fanfiction I've ever read. I think you should keep on writing the chapters. You're an amazing writer, so, keep up the great work!
CheshireKitKat chapter 20 . 4/18/2014
Continue this...

Also... being that this is a Hetalia Fan Fiction...and it being labeled choke...

You'd think that it would be about Denmark and Norway considering how many times Norway has choked Denmark with his tie and all...
Reader chapter 1 . 1/15/2014
Yes, you got me hooked! :D
Yugi's sister death chapter 20 . 1/14/2014
You've done a wonderful job, i love this story. Question will berwald ever meet tino's dad?
Shiralala chapter 20 . 11/25/2013
This wins the award for best storyline with so much smut. *trumpets blare*
Shiona Acitiu chapter 20 . 11/21/2013
This has been a really interesting read so far...I can't wait to see more...
like your story chapter 20 . 9/18/2013
I kinda feel like in their last chapter their relationship is kinda fucked up... like waldy is kinda... uh kinky n nuts.
But its really good! Up8 soooooon? *wonk*
Also I your nikolai
Baby
(Btw is he norway or male belarus? *confused...)
GREAt, ESSENTIALLY
kwityerbeliaken chapter 1 . 9/16/2013
Sounds interesting haha, excited to read!
ComedyStarGazer chapter 20 . 9/6/2013
Oh my God, I miss this story soo much. It's been awhile, but I'm glad you updated; and of course you're alright. _ I'm definitely glad I came across this story. Dark Sufin stories are pretty rare and the ones that do exist...aren't really dark and good. No offense to other writers! If there's one thing I'll always look forward to is you updating your stories and creating new ones in the future. Have you ever consider becoming a writer? You're very good at it and have your own unique writing style. Until your next update, continue being awesome!
timidGoddess chapter 20 . 8/23/2013
Oh, wow. I... don't know if Tino's behavior is unsettling, unhealthy, unnerving or all three to be totally honest. Holy hell, I haven't found a nice dark fic in a while UvU fuckin' kudos, yo. You write their relationship in a way that's... cute. And somewhat heartwarming - but still somewhat disturbing when you switch off to Tino's point of view, Berwald's love is generally innocent, though with a possessive undertone that he doesn't seem to understand and Tino's is just. Wow. Fuck. These last few chapters chilled me down to the core - again, fuckin' kudos. His desperation, is written just beautifully and from his point of view its easier to see just /how/ messed up everything is and just how urgently he needs Berwald and just how /fucked up/ he probably looks and seems from an outsiders view looking in. Ahhhh, I love this a whole lot, the dark undertones are enough to make me swoon and I'm looking forward to your next chapter UvU (I've been following this story since chapter five or so hehe, I've since switched accounts and moved several fandoms - I'm just glad I finally found this again, it's just as well written and wonderful as I remember).
StormSounds chapter 1 . 8/17/2013
Dark themes? In a SuFin!? Now I've GOT to read this (nice work)
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