|Reviews for Choke|
| ilurrrverussia chapter 20 . 8/2/2016
I think this is my favourite piece of FanFiction ever, and trust me I'm super picky so that's a massive compliment! I love the way you write, the way you make us hang on for more, the way my heart is now dying because it's finished. Honestly this was just so amazing and I felt truly immersed in the setting.
| Diana chapter 1 . 3/23/2016
I like it but I wished you said what ship it is before reading it
| desola.stevens chapter 8 . 11/3/2015
when I saw the "one night" words I started to sing fall out boy until I saw the next couple of words XD
| KuroRei-chan chapter 7 . 6/22/2015
| KuroRei-chan chapter 4 . 6/22/2015
This is so fun for me to read because my friends and I cosplay as the Nordics!
I'm Sweden, Anna (Biggums) is Denmark, Lauren is Finland, my girlfriend Jamie is Norway, and Gabby is Iceland.
| briana.schmidt1 chapter 20 . 3/24/2015
Ok, I'm not going to lie, some parts of this were dark and made me a little sick, but that is what you set put to do when you wrote those parts, is it not? However, besides that, the plot was fantastic, the characters weren't ooc (at least, not too much), and the dialogue punched me in the feels (first time saying that!) on occasion. Just overall, the story was realistic, and fluffy if you think about it from a realistic point of view. And I cannot wait for the prick bastard to get his just desserts! Maybe mamma finally leaves his sorry ass, now that Tino is safe.
| briana.schmidt1 chapter 11 . 3/24/2015
Oh good, for a second there, I thought that you were planning on discontinuing.
| SwedishMuse chapter 20 . 11/10/2014
I really enjoy this story; it's a nice blend of humor and seriousness. I usually don't care much for SuFin Fics because they all make Finland out to be, I don't know, childish? But the way he's portrayed here is refreshingly complex. Also, let me just say that I like that you wanted to write about a darker type of fetish. Even among writers it's always seemed like a taboo subject, but I feel like you breach it nicely and shine a more complete light on it. Very well done. :)
| 42BTomBakerStreet chapter 3 . 8/11/2014
Wow. Just wow. Rereadung this story. Its so amazing how you manage to capture Tino's troubles
| OMGjustinbeiberunicornprincess chapter 11 . 6/27/2014
(Please ignore my username, it was a joke. I promise I'm not some insane 8 year old or anything XD Also I'm just gonna refer to the characters by their country names cause that's what I normally do anyway)
I've really been enjoying this story so far and I really love the nordics. Like, alot. I especially like how you portrayed Norway and Denmark. I laugh everytime they show up. You have no idea how much I love how you did Poland too. If I love the nordics, I ADORE Poland and I think you did him justice. All I'm gonna say is MORE POLAND.
More Poland and this will probably the best fan fic I've ever read XD
| bia-douwata-13 chapter 20 . 6/21/2014
Can I hug you? This fanfic was one of the bests I've ever read. You know what? The descriptions. Although this was a highly disfunctional relationship, you wrote it perfectly - it wasn't some magic "love conquers all", but the end had a major growing out on your characters. This is probably my favorite SuFin fanfiction. I've been touched by the most of the story. I felt so bad about Fin and about Su too... I'm in no place to say that I understand him nor any of the characters, but I had a fair share of problems too. This fic was... Hurtfully great? I need the right adjective for it, but I can find it. Yeah, bugger. You're great, this is awesome and thank you, thank you so much for writing it.
| jerryseinfeld420 chapter 20 . 6/10/2014
Okay, so, usually I don't like to read really long (20 chapters) fanfictions, but when I read the title and the lines from the actual fanfiction itself, I thought I'd give it a try. The first few chapters (from 1 to 10) I thought I'd give up soon and carry on with my life.
I was wondering to myself, "Now, what does Choke have to do with anything?" Then, I started getting ideas; then I realized what this was about. Things for me got really interesting, so then I kept reading, which was when Tino wanted Berwald to choke him. Then, it hit me, "So THAT'S why it's called Choke!" This was honestly the best Hetalia fanfiction I've ever read. I think you should keep on writing the chapters. You're an amazing writer, so, keep up the great work!
| CheshireKitKat chapter 20 . 4/18/2014
Also... being that this is a Hetalia Fan Fiction...and it being labeled choke...
You'd think that it would be about Denmark and Norway considering how many times Norway has choked Denmark with his tie and all...
| Reader chapter 1 . 1/15/2014
Yes, you got me hooked! :D
| Yugi's sister death chapter 20 . 1/14/2014
You've done a wonderful job, i love this story. Question will berwald ever meet tino's dad?