Reviews for Chosen
Sleepyhallow01 chapter 10 . 8/21
amazing and great story .
DeathlyIceMaiden chapter 10 . 8/3
urghh the shit she would have to deal with on his planet...
400roc chapter 10 . 5/6
Update plzzz. Luv story
HuntressXHunter chapter 8 . 4/1
Um how can she not know?
EvonySiren chapter 10 . 3/23
Keep'em coming, this is awesome I looooove your writting style and story! :D
5seedapple chapter 10 . 3/8
Somehow, I managed to hold off my review till the end. Now I may say my peace... Dear fucking bejezzus this was sooooo good! Definitely not what I thought I'd fond while scrolling my favorite authors favorite stories. (Since thats mostly tmnt and teen titans stuff.) This is the first story in this category I've ever read but I am probably hooked, for like.. Ever. Part two... Here I come!
AriannaK chapter 1 . 3/1
I've read this story before, but I can't tell you how much I freaking love this. Just the first chapter has me so excited-even if I remember what's going to happen next! Thank you so much for creating this!
hermonine chapter 10 . 12/28/2015
great story
Myron23 chapter 4 . 6/27/2015
So... The Pred doesn't like horseback riding?

I prefer the video-game canon, where the Pred can see in the visible spectrum.

"if he were to confront him", who is the Pred thinking about?

Well, the human males don't exactly have to protected either, they can still be hunted...

An RPG-29 might do the trick.
Myron23 chapter 3 . 6/26/2015
Remember, reviews may be the lifeblood of a writer, but replies are the lifeblood of the reviewer.

I wonder what the Yautja would think the Turians, at least in terms of the mandibles.

What's "pauk"?

"Weren't there laws"? Who is asking, the predator or Anya?

I don't really get that part about her and hunting.
Soo... is Anya a vegetarian?

On of the beauties about guns is that you can deal with a home invader without having to sacrifice your personal space.

He didn't check her underwear drawer, just to see what kind lay in there?

But Predators can also see in the visible light spectrum like you and me, he wouldn't be able to consider her attractive on thermal vision alone.

I've always preferred Tigger.

This chapter took a little too long to go somewhere...

I still like the story though...
Myron23 chapter 2 . 6/26/2015
Do you think the Yautja could turn Pandora, home of the Na'vi, into a hunting ground

"oomans"? Humans, or womans? Or is it his manner of pronouncing the word?

So... the Yautja find slutty teasers be attractive?

I just wish people would bring back the old meaning "test driving the car"...

Indeed, we males are taken for granted in this day and age.

Ooh... am I going to get read the rest of that story? Will you write in down?

...oh boy.
Myron23 chapter 1 . 6/26/2015
Please forgive me if you don't like long reviews; I tend to be VERY thorough.

Uh, Where exactly are these women? They can't still be on Planet Earth, right?

Female indeed; whenever I play as Predator, I tend to leave the chicks untouched... It's sad how in AVP3, I can't try to be diplomatic with the stranded/marooned marines.

Ah... So the Predator burst through the Charon Relay and is now ruling mankind?

So,.. what does a predator do if the human chick he is trying to court shoots or stabs him? He doesn't execute her, does he?

At least the Preds only disarm the people who they deem a personal threat... or whatever the correct term is...

Indeed, I prefer the harsh kickback of my Mauser over that of any sidearm.

Can you picture Yautja in the MEU?

LOL, taking the shortcut.

Overall, I like it so far.
I find the idea of a race losing all of it's females and then deciding that a turning to a race of hybrids would be better than total extinction quite intriguing.
Did you ever read Justifiable Homicide?
melody musical chapter 10 . 5/16/2015
Please for the love of God tell me this isn't the end! I need details of what's to happen. Please!
BarbedCaress chapter 10 . 5/6/2015
A very interesting story.
Well Done!
silhouette1316 chapter 10 . 4/17/2015
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