Reviews for Unraveled
Naitch03 chapter 1 . 11/22/2014
This was a damn good story. Well done!
Simone chapter 1 . 1/12/2014
I am a huge fan of Emma Frost, especially her time with Generation X, and I thought your work was beautifully crafted. Thank you for that! You hit the nail on the head with Emma's characterization and your story was very catching. Keep up the good work, and I look forward to anything else you develop in regard to my favorite urbane telepath.
Jago Li Son Shiranui chapter 1 . 1/4/2013
Wow! That was amazing! I could feel the emotion just from reading!
Bookwyrm chapter 1 . 5/19/2011
I was thinking Inception too, from the moment little Jubilee shows up.

Good characterization. A bit rough on the use of dialog tags and pacing, but the characters all sound like themselves even to someone not paying attention to the latest X-Men stories (aside from what you mention when I visit your house, of course).
DigiRanma chapter 1 . 5/18/2011
Great story, loved the stuff between Emma and Jubes, especially the 'Barbie' comment.