|Reviews for Fate: Nightmare Apatheia|
| MidnightFenrir chapter 19 . 1/8
A very good story with depth and a lot of thngs to blow your mind. I will be waiting for what comes next.
| DukeScarlet chapter 19 . 12/21/2013
The synesthesia was very well done in this chapter. I know you'll get to it in due time but I'm interested in seeing more character development between the MCs (Lelouch, CC, Shirou, Saber). Since it's a crossover I like seeing how the two universes interact with each other.
That being said, I guess you already have a lot of things planned and so little time to write all of that so I'll just be patient and wish you the best 'till then.
'Till next chapter !
| DukeScarlet chapter 17 . 12/20/2013
First of all, very good fic so far. I first clicked on it by curiosity without getting my hopes too high. After all, how could a crossover between CG and F/SN possibly work ? Well you managed to make it work, I'm impressed and once again I must say, very good job.
Now, if I'm especially reviewing this chapter (while I usually do only after having read all released chapters when I begin reading a fic), it's to answer that question you had about magic and magecraft.
In the nasuverse, what magus perform is called magecraft. What is called "magic", is something surpassing magecraft, bringing about events that wouldn't be achievable with the mere expenditure of time or ressources. It is something attained by reaching the root (akasha).
An example of a magic user would be Aoko Aozaki or Kischur Zelretch Schweinorg (Rin's ancestor). Zelretch's magic is referred to as either his name, "Zelretch", or "Kaleidoscope" and allowed him to access parallel worlds (as seen in F/SN VN when Shirou uses the sword to emulate the effect of the magic to a lesser extent: taping into parallel worlds prana).
I hope this helped solve the confusion.
| Crow667 chapter 5 . 10/20/2013
...hey is rin dead? is she gonna appear? what about the tsukihime cast? would be awesome if they appeared. will lelouch still found La resistence? keep up the good work!
| Legion chapter 18 . 9/22/2013
Greetings writer, or God or however you wish to be addressed! This is the collective consciousness of what you know as /a/, in the parallel universe you have created with your words. Through millenia of technological advancement and spacetime research, we have managed to break through the multiverse barrier in order to temporarily possess a human on your side, in order to send you this message.
Year 20043 A.Z.
| SEIYU chapter 6 . 9/22/2013
I can't wait for Dietrhard and Kotomine to meet. Or for Kotomine to talk to Zero while he's distracted and Zero mistaking him for Diethard. Or vice versa.
| SockMonster58 chapter 19 . 6/13/2013
I had read this fic for the first time about a year ago, I suppose around the time it stopped updating, and thoroughly enjoyed it. So much so that I reread all of it about a week ago, even though I was resigned to my assumption that it would probably never be updated. Color me surprised, and more than a little excited, when I saw not one, but two new chapters! Even if I didn't like either of these universes, your great writing shouldn't be passed up.
As far as addressing some of your worries, I can't offer much else but praise. The hacker/technical jargon was very believable: it had enough aspects grounded in reality to seem plausible, but also a few fictional additions to fit the somewhat futuristic theme. Regarding non-OCs, your characterization feels spot on, and the OCs are very fleshed out as well. The only criticisms I can come up with is that I occasionally lose track of all the names being tossed around, but that is more my fault than yours, I should think - I need to brush up on my Code Geass canon.
Regardless, I look forward to the next chapters! :D
| roanoak chapter 19 . 6/13/2013
Kiritsugu emiya is assassin. Oh the drama of him meeting saber and shirou
| OBSERVER01 chapter 19 . 6/12/2013
| 1412 karasu chapter 19 . 6/12/2013
D'aww, thanks! I like what I came up with too... I'm so glad you find her fun to write! But honestly, props to you for making her come alive. Hopefully, I'll get a better sense of how you decided to characterize her in a less chaotic setting. It'll be fun to compare her to my image of her.
Also, I'm excited to see that you're taking her in a completely different direction than what I had thought she would go. I have absolutely no idea where you are going with this! (Which is awesome.)
Ah, yes, the wheelbarrow and the clothes. To be honest, I half expected her to pass the main characters on the road in her wheelbarrow or something in some random chapter, and later have the readers realize how small the world is (or not notice it at all). Actually, that could still happen. Haha, that's just a daydream though. I think Durarara's finally gotten to me.
But anyways, it's fine. That stuff only really comes out when it's just the characters hanging out anyways.
... It's really difficult for me to scroll around right now, so, guaranteed, this entire review is full of incomplete thoughts. Sorry.
Ahh, "very, very useful to Assassin's plans" makes quite a lovely sound. I'm actually surprised that you're having her play an even somewhat marginally important role in this fic.
... Not to be taken in the wrong way! It's just that, reviewers are kind of a wild card- you didnt know exactly what kind of (well, at least useable) characters you might get (though I suppose your writing style [it's quite heavy] has probably weeded out a lot of people). Oceane wasn't someone you had any way of planning for, so to give her a role is difficult. I wonder how much you had to change?
Ah, also, yay! For Assassin. I pictured Oceane as a morally ambiguous person anyways.
Ahh, can't wait to see what happens next!
No way would I forget! And everything is on alert anyways, even if i had. . though I will be re-reading this fic... Eventually... Because I've pretty much forgotten everything except Saber's fight with the knightmare. But I remembered how you said Oceane would be in the next chapter so I couldn't resist.
One point of weirdness- the soldiers and co. are all calling Oceane by her given name... Why? Sorry, I'm just a little nitpicky.
... Pretty much this entire review has been about my OC. Sorry -_-'
P.S. I love you for Canaan. The first time you wrote the name, I was like, NO WAY! And then you sealed the coffin by mentioning the 'synesthesia' and I was like, I like your style. Haha.
PPS: is it bad that the first thing I noticed was that you didn't use the accent? I don't care at all, after all typing that out so many times is annoying, but it's still a funny little point.
| 1412 karasu chapter 18 . 6/12/2013
Oh my god, you're amazing!
I lost track of this story for a while, unfortunately, and even when I searched through my favorite stories list I couldn't find it. I'm so happy you updated!
A little confusing, though only because I have a short fight-scene attention span. Also, who is the girl at the end? I guess I'll find out next chapter
Thanks so much for putting her in! Haha, I love the nickname. I forgot to put one in for you, haha.
I can't wait to see where you're going with this!
| MisterSP chapter 19 . 6/12/2013
**Officially, we don't even know if the internet exists in the universe of Code Geass.
It does. Lelouch is shown using a Japanese internet search engine in the first season. It's product placement, like Pizza Hut was, but he was clearly on a computer, using the internet. I think there might have been a couple other instances... students checking news sites? But I'm not sure.
**So, who is this actual Assassin?
...Well, that's kinda obvious. The description, though short, was pretty clear. Odd that you're not using one of the Hassan i Sabbah, though, but should be interesting to see how he interacts with... well, you know who.
| Thespurgin chapter 19 . 6/12/2013
the players are still gathering then. interesting...
| lostones chapter 17 . 4/10/2013
really wish youd update soon.
it's a shame that so many good stories go unfinished.
please dont let this be one of them?
| NewAgeOfPower chapter 17 . 4/8/2013
***Note, review was intended for Fate/Nightmare Apatheia