|Reviews for Homeostasis|
| Myurra-K chapter 10 . 12/28/2011
Hey, I just found this story after delving back into a nostalgic pool of K2, and though there's been no indication of the pairing I decided to read it anyway. I'm glad I did.
This has been incredibly amusing from the start, probably because Kyle's denial, how he deals with problems, the off chance of Kenny walking in on him, and the interactions between Kyle and Cartman are all classic and intriguingly written.
If you're anything like me, it may take you months but eventually you find the urge to come back to a story, so I hope you do continue this one. If you don't, it was still greatly written, and I'm glad you published it.
| Amberr-Ink chapter 10 . 7/6/2011
This is so... South Park-y...And. It's. Wonderful! I like the gradual pace of the plot, and how you've made almost exactly like the show. It's just freaking awesome. I can't wait for more:D
| loosedefense chapter 9 . 7/5/2011
Okay, I actually couldnt leave it alone, so I went back and dug through the story so I understand the situation now. Kyle slept with a hooker, got an STD, and needed antibiotics because he felt his balls were going to drop off. I'm guessing Kenny knew because he's either had a lot of experience with hookers and STDs, or Butters told him.
So you did provide the pieces ... but that's all they were. Pieces. As the reader, I shouldn't have to go back and sleuth around to find a way to fit them all together, and I wouldnt have had to had you provided us with more than just a few solitary lines for what was apparently a VERY big plotpoint. We had almost 10 chapters focusing on Kyle and the rest of the gang speculating on his sexuality, but only a passing mention as to everything else that is going on. I see from the reviews that I'm not the only person who was left thinking "Wait, what the fuck is going on?" when they finished reading your story. I'm sure we would have all appreciated a little more clarification on that aspect of the fic when you've already saturated every other chapter about how Kyle indulges in gay themes while maintaining his heterosexuality. The way you construct your chapters is what keeps interest, and as you can see, many of us forgot what Kyle had even done in the first place.
| loosedefense chapter 10 . 7/5/2011
Okay, honestly speaking, your story started out very strong, and I was really looking forward to a good satisfying read, but the frank truth is, the quality of this story has deteriorated exponentially since the first chapter. Your chapters, I've noticed, seem to be slowly growing shorter and shorter, the characters jump from one emotion to the next without any semblance of reason, and I can't help but feel that your plot has just ... stagnated.
I apologize, I hardly ever leave bad reviews, but the reason why I decided to leave my thoughts is because I see a LOT of potential in this story, and it's STILL there, but you really need to progress with the plot, because after having read this far, I find myself wondering, "Does this story even have a point?"
So I would recommend a little less emphasis on showing us how everybody suspects Kyle is gay, and a little more focus on what comes next in the plot.
I'd also like to see a little bit more clarification on what's going on with some of the things you've already established, such as what Kenny gave Kyle a few chapters ago. Was it medication? Why? What did Kenny mean when he asked Kyle "What do you got?" What exactly was he referring to? Was Kyle medically sick or suffering from the effects of drugs? Because marijuana wouldn't really make anyone look so serious that others grow concerned for their wellbeing the way everybody here worries about Kyle's. Why is everyone acting like they know something? Is it because Kenny told them, or not? How did Kenny know what to give Kyle when theres been no mention made whatsoever as to what it was Kyle was suffering from that would make Kenny give him pills, that part of the story came out of nowhere, and it hasnt been mentioned since, which looks like sloppy planning on your part.
So I hope to see an update on this story someday, and I hope for greater progression because you have something strong here, but it's really floundering because there's no basic foundation for your story to build itself upon. It looks as though you're winging it without any real aim or purpose, and while MANY authors - myself included - work the same way, the worst thing that can happen is for that process to translate onto the screen to the point where even the readers start to feel lost.
Good luck on this story, and I hope to read an update soon.
| Tsuki6047 chapter 10 . 6/24/2011
| SilentSpeaker13 chapter 10 . 6/24/2011
Haha, loving it; the whole story I mean. This last chapter cracked me up though, it was very funny in and of itself, but it also partly reminded me when I came out.
| Scarlet Wolf chapter 10 . 6/24/2011
That's good evidence. Kyle doesn't think he should tell anyone. not even Stan, so he won't tell.
| Scarlet Wolf chapter 9 . 6/24/2011
It's not rape if you invite it
| rosy2lee2 chapter 10 . 6/24/2011
Aww, poor Stan, being left out! /orz
| rosy2lee2 chapter 9 . 6/24/2011
LUL I never thought I'd say this, but Cartman is KICKASS! (even if he is an asshole, like always)
| PurpleandBlackPandas chapter 10 . 6/24/2011
Ohh... Stans catching on... I like it
| rosy2lee2 chapter 8 . 6/18/2011
Lol, why'd Kyle have to take anti-biotics?
But this story is awesome, update soon!
| PurpleandBlackPandas chapter 8 . 6/13/2011
Nice. I dont get why Kyle needs the antibiotics, but thats cause im stupid and forgot... Lol
| Tsuki6047 chapter 8 . 6/9/2011
awesome chap, update soon please :D
| Scarlet Wolf chapter 8 . 6/9/2011
How did Kenny know something was wrong?