Reviews for Giving In
TheStoryChoosesTheWriter chapter 1 . 3/28/2013
Well done, you are the first person to make me truly cry at Fred's death. I always felt really upset at his death, it was Fred's death that affected me the most but now for the first time there are real tears flowing down my face... Bravo... :'(
LeannePatriciaGroeneveld chapter 1 . 7/15/2011
I kid you not, this legitly made me cry. :') That means you're good, just to let you know.
Alexis chapter 1 . 7/15/2011
This was a great story! I really felt all of his emotions and you definitely had me tear up! You write beautifully.
psychopath convention chapter 1 . 5/22/2011
This was incredibly well-written and heartbreaking.

I don't know that Molly was completely in character, but honestly, that doesn't matter to me right now because it was still so good.

Well done!
Heart of Spellz chapter 1 . 5/22/2011
Oh, God! You definitely had me tearing up there a few times. This was magnificent! Poor George...I loved the way you showed Mrs. Weasley not really looking at him, and then calling him Fred when she actually did. I can only imagine how much that would hurt a person...

Wonderful job, dear!

Here is your score. All categories will be judged on a scale of five:

Characterisation: 5/5

SPAG (Spelling, Punctuation, and Grammar): 5/5

Tear Worthiness: 4/5

Total: 14/15
ILoveSadEndings chapter 1 . 5/19/2011
Poor George. It was a truly amazing story, words cannot describe it. (;