Reviews for Outbreak
Kuro kaze no aka kira chapter 3 . 8/4
I kinda think it's ridiculous that you're forcing Naruto and Saeko to pair up. Seriously, Saeko is her own woman, it's pretty annoying making her out to be a vulnerable flower when it comes to boys. Pairing her up with Takashi makes more sense than anything if you ask me. Naruto and Shizuka, however, is a definite possibility. Shizuka is scared and confused of what was happening, and she was saved and comforted by Naruto. It fits like that.
I personally don't like where this is going. I mean, evil split personality? It's just... cliché.
Hestia chapter 22 . 6/11
Make another sequil Senpai! Pretty please
ExplodingKnuckler chapter 1 . 5/20
Nice Start :)
ButterTARDIS36 chapter 22 . 5/5




Have Made Me...


My heart - my feeling and heart
Your instructions- The scene where (spoilers!) Naruto comes back to life
The giant middle finger - (spoilers!) The announcement of the sequel

This was one of the best stories I have ever read, I am truly homered to have read it. If only you could turn this story into a book... But anyways, as you most likely have read above, this is a tear-jerking story that has me crying as loud as I am able (which, btw, is not very loud because it is 11:30 at night, which means that yeah, your story is so good I am putting off sleep just to read it). My pillow is now soaking wet (thank goodness I have a second one). So... Yeah! Can't wait to read the sequel!

The Fangirl Who Has Her Heart Torn In Half,
ButterTARDIS36 (a.k.a. Chloe Summers)
Guest chapter 1 . 4/1
Naruto should not be running out of chakra so quickly
Jiggly Joe chapter 2 . 12/17/2014
To be blunt, your writing sucks.

I hope you've improved with time. Otherwise, stop writing. There's so much wrong here that I don't even know where to begin.
Guest chapter 22 . 11/6/2014
Good story but you could of put some more effert for the epilogue
Guest chapter 6 . 10/4/2014
this was friken halarous
Arkisenn chapter 2 . 5/25/2014
I read the reviews before writing my own, and I have to agree. You made Naruto not just a dick, but a stupid dick. What kind of idiot withholds important information from the people he's trying to save. Not telling anyone that the enemy they face CAN KILL YOU IN ONE ATTACK via a bite or a scratch is like breaking the legs of some kid who doesn't know how to swim then throwing him into the deep end of the pool and pushing him away whenever he reaches for the edge.

I won't criticize the personality change, watching zombies kill/convert your friends and being forced to kill them is psychologically traumatizing. However, you made a MAJOR mistake by trying to write Naruto as this silent, calm, and collected badass when you failed to take his experience in dealing with this situation into account. In a zombie apocalypse ANY life whose mind isn't consumed by insanity is precious. Standing back and doing nothing in an attempt to "teach" the survivors a lesson is just plain dumb.
Neosfotty chapter 15 . 4/16/2014
Oh lol I put comment like that only to read the next chapter and all my questions are answered. Disregard my last review.
Neosfotty chapter 14 . 4/16/2014
I need to ask if Naruto was the strongest Shinobi in then Elemental Nations were is his Ninjutsu? Or kage bunshins? Or Rasengan? Or his massive chakra reserves? If Naruto was the last hope for the humans iam sure he would have learnt a few more things than a couple ken jutsu moves. If you already addressed comments like these then could you repeat what you said? Iam just curious.
Matsu chapter 22 . 2/10/2014
I have to say Naruto's death and resurrection reminds me of Neo Yondaime Hokage for he does practically die killing Orochimaru (blood clone) but returns to life with a more advanced version of Tsunade's 'Rebirth', but all in all a good story great work.
Guest chapter 3 . 2/9/2014
A split personality? sorry but is that the best you can do? I mean Naruto is a bit Bi-Polar but doesn't have two personalities.
techtroche chapter 22 . 1/2/2014
loved it
VioletSaber chapter 22 . 10/28/2013
You should inform the readers that your fanfic is a harem. I thought this was going to be a single pairing with Naruto and Saya since those were the character labels that you used and you had no mention of a harem. However, turns out this fic is a harem.
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