|Reviews for Outbreak|
| ivanganev1992 chapter 3 . 1/1
That is my version of the said jutsu
AIA E Haka (With All power the otherwordy to perish)
| Look what Jesus did chapter 2 . 10/11/2016
Don't really see any of Naruto's character traits in this uncaring Sasuke ish version. I mean he waited on Hizashi getting bitten and did nothing to warn them of the dangers. He explains nothing clearly or coherently and derides Takeshi for not trusting him despite the fact that from Takashi's point of view he's made a very poor showing of leadership skills and basic empathy
| Guest chapter 2 . 9/11/2016
LIKE HOW NARUTO IS SO... YEAH LIKE THAT
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/11/2016
I LOVE HOW YOU MADE THE 9 TAILS A FEMALE... HMMH
| mushy guillotine chapter 16 . 3/27/2016
Where the fuck is the Kyuubi?
| BartWLewis chapter 22 . 2/15/2016
| Guest chapter 21 . 1/25/2016
I love this story dude. It completly unique, i mean ive never seen anyone personify the zombie virus before lol. Also it was vary well written.
Please for the love of god write the sequel
| jwc333096 chapter 15 . 1/11/2016
I keep my laptop on me at all times so no one can mess with my stories so try that it will prevent you from having a everything wiped from your laptop but if it is a regular computer set the stories with a security code only you would know. I hope my advice is really helpful and why not check out my crossover of dead man Wonderland and Dragon Ball gt if you would like to.
| Kuro kaze no aka kira chapter 3 . 8/4/2015
I kinda think it's ridiculous that you're forcing Naruto and Saeko to pair up. Seriously, Saeko is her own woman, it's pretty annoying making her out to be a vulnerable flower when it comes to boys. Pairing her up with Takashi makes more sense than anything if you ask me. Naruto and Shizuka, however, is a definite possibility. Shizuka is scared and confused of what was happening, and she was saved and comforted by Naruto. It fits like that.
I personally don't like where this is going. I mean, evil split personality? It's just... cliché.
| Hestia chapter 22 . 6/11/2015
Make another sequil Senpai! Pretty please
| ExplodingKnuckler chapter 1 . 5/20/2015
Nice Start :)
| MystyNyght chapter 22 . 5/5/2015
Have Made Me...
LAUGH AND CRY AND YOU MADE MY HEART SHATTER INTO A MILLION PIECES AND AS I GLUE MY HEART PIECE BY PIECE, FOLLOWING YOUR INSTRUCTIONS, IT TURNS OUT IT IS A GIANT, MIDDLE, FINGER!
My heart - my feeling and heart
Your instructions- The scene where (spoilers!) Naruto comes back to life
The giant middle finger - (spoilers!) The announcement of the sequel
This was one of the best stories I have ever read, I am truly homered to have read it. If only you could turn this story into a book... But anyways, as you most likely have read above, this is a tear-jerking story that has me crying as loud as I am able (which, btw, is not very loud because it is 11:30 at night, which means that yeah, your story is so good I am putting off sleep just to read it). My pillow is now soaking wet (thank goodness I have a second one). So... Yeah! Can't wait to read the sequel!
The Fangirl Who Has Her Heart Torn In Half,
ButterTARDIS36 (a.k.a. Chloe Summers)
| Guest chapter 1 . 4/1/2015
Naruto should not be running out of chakra so quickly
| Jiggly Joe chapter 2 . 12/17/2014
To be blunt, your writing sucks.
I hope you've improved with time. Otherwise, stop writing. There's so much wrong here that I don't even know where to begin.
| Guest chapter 22 . 11/6/2014
Good story but you could of put some more effert for the epilogue