This. Is. TOTALLY AWESOME!

Really well written story. I enjoyed it a lot: characters retain their personalities (albeit a bit more "mature"), well paced, a sweet ending.

I really needed to read a sweet ending, after "Be My Escape" and "Eyes Turned Skyward", I needed this story.

It seems you have abandoned writing, I say that's a shame considering this story.

This story was just amazing. I have read and re-read it so many times the words are now etched into my brain. You capture the personalities of the characters do well it makes me believe this could really be a future for the show.
I love it, and every time I read it again I lI've it more. You truly are an amazing writer and I can't wait to see more of your work. Especially of this fantastic couple.

Holy crap!

Oh glob where do I start here. I guess I'm just adding onto the train of positive comments here, I don't care though you deserve all this praise. Let me start out by saying, wow, you stayed true to the characters' personalities surprisingly well. I would say skillfully, to be honest. If this is made into a series ending movie finale in a few years I wouldn't be surprised in the slightest. You need to write a book, or a series of books for that matter. I started reading this so late at night but once I felt myself getting sucked in I knew this was gonna be an all nighter, one shot read and you held me captive until the very end. This played on all of my emotions and the fact that it was FinnxMarceline really did me in, Marceline being my favorite AT character. That really was an amazing story, I know that I'm going to read this many times over. I can't even write enough words to tell you how much I loved this but I think you get the idea by now. Thank you so much. I hope I see your work on all the best seller's lists in the future.

I love this story to no end! :)
The way you set up the plot as if it where a big puzzle, and all the peices where slowley put together toward the end had my attention throughout the whole story.:)
Each transaction from one thing to the next was as smoothe as butter and as clear as glass, and i loved how you made each and every character likable in SOME way.
The inner conflicts Finn has toward both Marceline and Princess Bubblegum is very realistic, almost relatable. :) And within each battle and conflict there was a hidden message waiting to be figured out.
Thank you so much for entertaining me with this amazing fanfic! You have great potential! :)

This fanfic was amazing! I cried when Marceline died, and I'm so happy that she is human, or at least half-human.

well done.
i really mean it. This story, is excellent. i read the first chapter and debated if i should click to the next or not. I'm really glad i did. you capture the characters perfectly, you string a story together with what appears to be ease and perfect fluidity. it has just the right amount of fluffy goodness, mixed with suspense and action and plot twists and an excellent beginning middle and end. You, write extremely well. I know a story is good when i feel sad, but oh so satisfied when i reach the end. I didn't stop reading once i started.
So well done, dear author. Well done.

I love you for writing this story i absolutely love it! :3 :D

Oh my gawd... This is pure, amazingy. It tottally stands next to Eyes Turned Skyward.

I want to write so much but it is difficult with this malfunctioning phone. But your story was so amazing! I loved it and can't believe it exists in this site. Congratulations on writing this story!

OMG! OMG! This...story is just so...wow...
its so well done. I'm thrown and so impressed. Seriously you're brilliant and it so works! It does! This is exactly how it should be.

bahahaha poor jake XD

Oh wow seriously this was so good! I've been reading random stories on here for this show and you're the only one who makes this feel natural. My heart is in my throat! :D It has everything I love and want for this one!

Brilliant! I'm invested in this story and can't wait to see where this go. :)