THAT WAS AWESOME

i share the sentiment of fin's (did not know it was short for Finnegan meh) that pb's end of the stick was covered in shit but other than that this was awesome

Thank you for finishing this, I loved it.

Read this as a joke but... snozers man this was good. The characters were great the story rocked. I read tons of fic and this was one of the best glad I read it.

u say "i exhale loudly"then "i sigh" arent they the same thing?...:03

- greengreenXB! over and out!:03

awwwww, poor finn! this is good stuff...cuz i no good stuff when i read it!great begining!:03

-greengreenXB! over and out!:03

Okay, seriously, I had no idea what I was getting myself into when I started reading this two hours ago but holy camoly that was amazing. I hadn't really decided whether I was a FinnxPB or a FinnxMarceline supporter before now but hell do I know now.

The detail you've put into this, the thought and how it matches up with the programme so well... Seriously, I have no words. Even incorporating stuff like 'totes' and 'math' and 'lump' that most people would forget while writing. I am honoured to have read this and Pendleton Ward would be proud.

Keep up the amazing writing! :D

This was a great story.

I am sad about one thing though, like every great show, that it has to end.

Hope that didn't sound too cheesy.

Really did enjoy reading this story.

Hope you make many more like it.

this was such a well written AT fic! it was cute and original and just plain amazing.

i am now going to go check out your profile.]

whoa! alive.o_o unexpected turn.

Just wanted to say that the beginning is just like the Finn and Jake from the show, nice job.

Funny how Finn and Jake could have so many different sources but are only finding out about it now.

5stars

Very beautiful. I'm honored to be finished reading such a wonderful tale, and I hope to read more fantastic things from you. I am curious about one thing though, if it would be possible for a one-shot of Fin and Marceline being turned into vampires at an older age, showing flashbacks of their first kid(s), Jake, the Ice King, and other character's fates before their turning. Either way, thanks for writing a great story!

Until next time.

i am first going to say do not hate me for saying i have read better. but only 1 better story. this story is the best finn and marcealene romance. if u want to know which story is better look up Eyes Turned Skyward by bubblewrap leach. it is a feeolee. but there was alot of emotions this one could have been an 2 hour long special. this one was really good thank u

BEST. FANFIC. EVER. I'm series, this was flipping awsome. A truely beutiful story! This is the kind of thing I would read over and over again. You said you would make seqal and stuff. I hope they come soon! Oh, and about my huge story... I am gooing to tell you the truth: I havnt even started it... But for real! It is coming! And trust me... It's going to be huge. Maybe bigger than yours! I'm shooting for the stars here! Well, your my fave and inspiration so keep your eyes peeld foor my story.

This goes to evryone... The title is...drumbroll...

"THE FINAL CHAPTER OF ARE NIGHTS HEART, TRUE"

I read this and just... you're good. I really felt like i was watching the show and that this was something that could be real cannon. It's so hard to find stories like this and just authors that know the characters and how they feel and how to develop them as the story moves along and eventually comes to an end. This is one story where I don't feel a sequel is need or necessary. It would be appreciated and well-liked no doubt but its one of those let the reader fill in the blanks for anything beyond the epilogue.

When it comes down to it, bravo my friend. Bravo.