and so the adventure continues! that was a great story. i almost wish there was a sequal to it, you know to cover up what happens after this. i thought finns speech to the candy kingdom was well done and kinda insperational. any way i cant wait to see what you do next.

There are many AT fanfic writers on this website...but almost none of them (IMO) stack up when compared to you AND THIS HELLUVA masterpiece. You have weaved such a fine and intricate tale of romance, drama/suspense, and adventure in a well-written manner! You also kept the characters as in-character as possible, and that is highly commendable; some writers often go astray from canon and end up losing me because of some oddball tangents on part of the characters they are attempting to portray, unlike you and the other writers who have successfully kept the characters in tune with their canonical selves.

The epilogue was great in the sense that you wrapped the story up very nicely, and that you snuck in the word "adventure" near the very end.

I cannot hope to describe the entirety of how excellent and how grand and wonderful this is but I can say this: all in all, this story is one of the best AT fanfics of all time.

You, author, have my SEAL OF APPROVAL.

Ok ive been reading this story for acouple days and just gotta say. WOW . It was i must declare most well thought out love story ive read. The near ending actually brought a tear to my eye. Please do us all a favor in the real world and dont stop doing what you do best. Hell i was even inspired too

HOLY SHI- that was an awesome story, incredibly written, wonderful plot, and straight out a good-read!

i smell sequel

But seriously of all the the fanfics, in all the internet, in all the multiverse, one summers day i stumbled upon this one, and 5 hours later i was screaming at my lap top because i came to the end of chapter 12 and there were no up dates. i'll be honest, i was disquieted, but that is the mark of a good story, that you get so in to it, you forget that it's fiction and you feel one with the plot. to describe how many ways i enjoyed this story, well, this would end up being 3 times as long as it, and i can't give you any physical award (that makes me think, we should have an award ceremony for fanfictions, but i digress) i can only say this, thank you, thank you for being an adventure time fan,and a wonderful writer, because when it comes right down to it, its not really the fact that its adventure time that made me like it so much (although that is a reason) its the fact that the characters not only felt like the characters from the show, but they also felt like real people who have real reactions to situations. in the end i say on to you bravo sir or madam, and i call upon my fellow readers to join me. bravo ruby sword, bravo.

Beautiful man just great, the story was fantastic man, Worthy of being the top story in Finnceline ever, and i should know since i read every single one of them:)

I think you scrambled my brains like they were eggs in a frying pan with the sheer amount of awesomeness this fic has. I seriously can't get over how perfect this story was. Yeah, I'm a little sad that it's finally reached its destination, but it's the journey that matters... Or so I hear. You made Finn and Marceline actually sound credible together all while avoiding painting Bubblegum as a villain. Instead of making PB a friggin' whore, you made her a martyr, which was refreshing. Even though I'm not one to really ship her with anyone, I still enjoy Bubblegum as a character.

I whole heartedly approve of the subtle dirtyness layden within this chapter, it's pretty much what I live for.

I won't ask you to continue this story, I won't even ask for a sequel, but it would be nice if there were more fics kicking around the adventure time section that were written by "Ruby Sword."

There is no more words. Just applauding and a standing ovation. I hope to see more Adventure Time from you! But until then...What time is it?

Adventure Time!

This was incredibly good, well written, and the whole story in general was amazing. I'm glad I stuck around and waited for you to finish. I've read a lot of Finnceline stories, but this one is by far the best I've ever read. You have talent.

Why do you do sad so good? You totally didn't make this easy on Finn or Marceline and that was made all of this so, so, so excellent. And the guy perspective and the almost easy but not really fantastic banter that seems right out of the script of AT is gorgeous and very much funny and fabulous. Totally rad. In so many, many great ways. :)

OMGLOB! OMGLOB! OMGLOB! This story is so so so so amazing! I can't describe in words even how good this is! It's so friggin good! It kept me as good a professional author would. At first I was just looking at the length and I was kind of warded off. There were a lot of reviews on it, so I decided to give it a try. BEST FANFIC OF MY WHOLE LIFE! IT IS SO GOOD! I was nearly chewing off my fingernails while the cliff hangers. This is the best adventure story. EVER! This story is perfect! Your soul is perfect! I'm not even sure if I want to see the ending or if I don't want this story to end! I love Jake sassing the Cosmic Owl. GREAT IDEA! WHY CAN'T I WRITE AS AWESOME AS THIS!

This story is awesome and all your dialogue is perfectly in character. I feel like I'm reading a script from the show. I would imagine that capturing finn and Jake's speech would be difficult but you do it great.

Holy crap! That was awesome!

Other than the epilouge, (which I cant for!) That was a perfect ending!

And I gotta say, im gonna miss reading your story. You gotta a gift. :)

I think I love you.

This story is AMAZING

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Awww, Finn's family and race are avenged and marcelline's(sp?) human again! Great story update soon.. or I WILL EAT YOUR SOUL.

Random rant no. 63

"there's no WAY I'm a vampire. Just 'cause I'm duper white , somewhat anti-social and have a tendency to eat red stuff doesn't mean I'm a male vampire. The main way to know is because I'M...NOT...GAY!

-Me

(no offense to gay peeps intended)