Wow this is a great story I love it and the shipping of marceline and finn please keep writing

I sincerely hope you plan on continuing this story! It is honestly the best AT fanfic (if not one of THE best fanfics) I've read on this site!

yay! And oh noes! I hope that you update this! Seeing as though you haven't in a while. Its a good plot line and I really want to know what happens next!

In it's essence, what he said. This is the BEST fanfic I have EVER READ! And I have read About 200 just to laugh. Absolutely WONDERFUL! Update soon please?

Ok, so here's the deal; I review really bad fan fiction for laughs and came here looking for material. Little did I know I would find the single most genuinely riveting piece of fan fiction I have ever read. I literally read all current 12 chapters in a matter of a few hours, finishing at 2:30 in the morning. When I hit the end I literally cried out in frustration at the cliffhanger and desperately awaited the next update. This was like, a month ago. In absolute seriousness you've taught me fan fiction can be a force for total good.

This chapter, like all of them, was great. I knew things with Finn/Marcie/Bonnie were going to get more complicated and I suspected Marcie knew more than we were letting on.

CLIFFHANGER. OHMYGLOB. I NEED TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT. SRSLY.

please, please, PLEASE update soon! i luv this story :)

there are no words to describe how much i love this story, the plot, the execution, the subtle and even not so subtle interactions between the characters, Finn's narration. what i really like though is the fact that the story seemed to grow up with Finn yet still maintain its lightheartedness in the face of teen angst and utter doom. 1000 times please update soon. i just thought of words to describe how much i love this story, I WISH THIS WAS CANNON. oh yeah that much.

It's really well-developed so far. Extremely good job so far. Can't wait until you update.

PLEASE UPDATE SOON! I LOVE THIS STORYY

BIG NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! DDDDD8

Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaughh! I stayed up reading this from about 8PM to 4PM-! Fffff! D8 ... Aaaaaaaaahhhh! A!

I hope a month and a week mean something, cuz I don't know how I can cope with waiting, not only realizing that this story is almost over already. ._.;; *sadness*

I may draw fanart from this though... . I just mayyy... :] muwahamuwahmuwahahaha~! XD

Q3Q *big wistful sighhhhhhhhhh* Even though I'm like super tired and totally gurglin' in mah stomach with the hungies, this was a very enjoyable evening. I'm sad it's technically over already. U.U much love 3

YOU ALMOST AS SCARY AS CLIFFHANGERS! ... Almost.

The story is frikin'... Mathematical!

Hmm, not much to say other than that really.

My only problem with this story is the lack of a recent update. I mean, what the lump?

Please update this story ASAP! Thus is defs one of the best AT fanfics I have read so far! Not to mention well thought out. A!

This is the best Adventure Time story I have had the pleasure of reading. It's fantastic and the characters definitely feel canonical. I hope you continue with this.

This is, simply put, a fantastic story. At first I was a bit wary of the first person narrative, if only because most fanfictions I have ever read from that perspective sucked hard, but you have managed to make it work so, so well. I can't wait for your next update, because seriously, this is one high cliff that I'm left hanging on here.

YES I AGREE! i love this fanfic...its so deep and amazingly writen...please continue...ive been reading seen two days ago from start to now so please continue...best fanfic ive read so far...