Reviews for The Last Yagami Child
Guest chapter 6 . 10/27/2014
Good story but the continuity errors are getting to me. For one thing, which country is this taking place? Light and his family are Japanese, they live in Japan. The series mainly takes place in Japan. Sayu ears shouldn't just pick up when hearing Japanese nor should she only use the language sometimes. Japanese is her mother tounge, she shouldn't be speaking anything else! And there is no way the school will let Near enrol without parental guardianship or without a full name! Near enrolling on his own can be overlooked but the teachers wouldn't call him Near, unlike canon, is just a foreign kid who should be fluent in Japanese if he is able to communicate fully with everyone. Near needs a first and last name to enroll! And how old is L? He was pretty young in canon but since he has a daughter, I can assume you've aged him? And when is this taking place? The Yotsuba arc? If that's the case, then Light has no memory of being Kira and there is no Death Note in his possession
Raidriar chapter 1 . 9/7/2014
Sayu's as clever as Kira? Interesting. I'm looking forward to reading about this
Randomness-sama chapter 10 . 8/31/2014
Yay! Thank you for the update XxXMorganXxXLEAHXxX-sensei! I know, I haven't reviewed this story before, and I really should have, this story inspired me to write my own Near/Sayu fic similar to this one, which is why I'm glad I found this when I did, if I found this after you finished it then the plotlines would be almost identical, even now I'm changing it in as many ways possible, but I think I'm getting to close, could you read it and tell me if I did something wrong please? It would be very much appreciated Sensei!
Akemi-chan chapter 1 . 2/12/2014
Please update! It's a really goo story and I'm dying to read more!
JetPackBlues chapter 8 . 12/27/2013
Update please! im dying to read more jdncjksdnvjdnskj
Mikkachanx chapter 8 . 12/18/2013
YOU UPDATED!YAYY! I really love this story! Please update again soon!
Miikachan chapter 7 . 4/3/2013
Oh my gosh,I love this story so much! This is really the only story I've ever read about Sayu and it's really good. Please update again soon!
FluffyCas chapter 7 . 4/2/2013
Ohh this is amazing! I can'twait for another update
mchalla4 chapter 6 . 12/2/2012
I'm going to start off by saying that I love your story for a few reasons:
1) I'm a sucker for Near/OC fanfics
2) Your storyline is absolutely brilliant! I love it :D
3) I really like how you've integrated your OC's into the story in an original way. You've provided it in a logical manner and I have to admit that I can't find a single plot hole.

One thing that I have noticed that you need to work on is grammar and spelling. It's nothing major, but there's a few syntax mistakes in a chapter, which are pretty easy to fix.

Good luck with your story and Happy Writing! Can't wait to see the newest update :D
FlowerBlooms chapter 6 . 11/13/2012
I LOVE this story!
LeftyPixie chapter 5 . 11/11/2012
Write faster please. I think this is the first SayuxNear I've read that had a lot of thought and planning put into it, keep up the good work.
Miikachanx chapter 5 . 8/19/2012
Hmm I wonder where Elle will be moved too?
I Am The Real L chapter 4 . 8/14/2012
Plz update soon
The Original Undertaker chapter 4 . 4/26/2012
i like this alot
NanaLoveChel chapter 4 . 4/1/2012
Update?
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