|Reviews for Jacob & Renesmee|
| Guest chapter 11 . 8/12
| Guest chapter 24 . 8/4
I loved this and didn't want it to end!
| Guest chapter 11 . 7/27
Chapter 10&11 is way to "lemony". Its just a whole new emotion to the lovely twilight saga. Jacob is much unlike himself he is practically digusting in these chapters and as for Renesmee she is way to bold for the virgin she claims to be. However, good effort, you might actually become an author by writing! :)
| Jam chapter 1 . 7/10
I thought Alice can't "see" the wolves and Nessie. That's a bit confusing..
| EscapeArtist-AX chapter 2 . 7/7
This chap was a little out of character, but i'll let it slide because it still was pretty good. :)
| it's simply me n you chapter 23 . 6/26
I like this ending. I didn't want to see him become a vampire.
Really liked your take on how they lived their lives (married, twins, etc).
I've read some of your more recent stories & enjoy your writing. Thanks for sharing with us.
| Daphnne chapter 2 . 4/22
sorry but... how would ALICE see what nessie would want to do to jacob when she cant see both of them?
| Adamgerd chapter 24 . 4/13
Both endings are good, although I wonder won't Jacob stop phasing when he moves or will seth come with him and they'll still phase?
| Guest chapter 23 . 3/21
This was AWESOME! I love this version! You are an AWESOME writer!
| Guest chapter 4 . 3/20
THIS WAS AWESOME...I LITERALLY COULD NOT STOP READING! IT WAS GREAT AS A WHOLE e
| Crawford chapter 23 . 2/15
This is the best most authentic ending. He hated bloodsuckers and Bella loved them. Of course he had to be a werewolf.
| Guest chapter 8 . 1/10
| lucy willow chapter 7 . 1/9
Not knocking your writing, which is brilliant. but I can't think of them as a couple... Its far too creepy for my liking and not remotely believable. Bella should have picked him, then they would have had kids together... Not this kind of stuff
| 1 Twi-Hard chapter 24 . 12/26/2015
| justsaying chapter 4 . 12/21/2015
jacob shouldnt say honny or hun or sweetheart it sounds like he is an uncle or something