Reviews for Jacob & Renesmee
Lizzie chapter 23 . 12/5/2011
Wow! That was absolutely amazing! I loved it so much, it felt just like a proper sequel to BD. You should definitely consider writing a novel and getting it published!


Lizzie, 16
love chapter 1 . 11/5/2011
you should make another for jacob and his werwolf side i loved this story
Haley chapter 1 . 10/15/2011
Wow I can't imagine Nessie wanting to have sex yet awesome entry
Haley chapter 1 . 10/15/2011
Wow I can't imagine Nessie wanting to have sex yet awesome entry
Jupitterblue chapter 24 . 10/4/2011
acdc00420 chapter 2 . 9/25/2011
ok that was fucking weird there has def got to be a better way to explain conflicting emotions without resorting to masturbating wtf i doubt i can read anymore of this lol
acdc00420 chapter 1 . 9/25/2011
pretty good starting place alice cant see jake or nessie or anything that pertains to them so thats the only mistake i see your jumping into things pretty fast which is good it makes me think that this one will actually have a story line instead of just a bunch of fluff and mellodrama like almost every other jake and nessie story on here lol no one seems to know the meaning of the word plot outside of being melodramatic or writing soap operas
Syndi-Dowell chapter 24 . 9/11/2011
Great story! :)
celi chapter 1 . 9/10/2011
very god
Shreya1986 chapter 24 . 9/3/2011
Gr8 story...just hope u write a sequel about jake adjusting to his vampire life wid will be very interesting...
julz12 chapter 23 . 9/1/2011
glad they had a happy ending!
polly2010 chapter 23 . 9/1/2011
I love that he's a wolf again!
ScotchnStout chapter 24 . 8/31/2011
liked both endings but I rather this 1
dkgors chapter 24 . 8/31/2011
Feel free to ad a few chapters of jakes life as a vamp. I would be very interesting! Take care, dixie
dkgors chapter 23 . 8/31/2011
I'm so glad Jake stayed a wolf! and 5 kids! Thank your story, I really enjoyed it!

Take care, Dixie
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