Reviews for Jacob & Renesmee
serenity143 chapter 2 . 3/18/2013
how about dividing your paragraphs? They're waaaay too long ... I'm getting headaches just reading your story...
Champion of Justice chapter 23 . 3/16/2013
Awesome story! I loved it. This ending was my favorite.
kelsey derousse chapter 1 . 3/11/2013
Awsome chapter its so amazeing . Should be a movie !
reader chapter 1 . 3/4/2013
I loved it. I wish it had more towards the end i wanted more. So loved him being able to turn to a wolf again. Its just not Jacob if he's not.
jupiter2005 chapter 24 . 2/21/2013
i liked the first ending, and like nessie, i cant picture jacob as anything but a werewolf, keep up the good writing.
Brittany chapter 24 . 2/12/2013
I like the one where jacob is a wolf that was always so special to him and nessie.
alixandria chapter 24 . 1/27/2013
it would be better to tell more about his appearance and how he reacted to everything and everyone...and give some more insight to his new lif,e but it's good...
alixandria chapter 23 . 1/27/2013
I love this ending to the story, it fits better...
alixandria chapter 22 . 1/27/2013
whoa.
alixandria chapter 21 . 1/27/2013
double
damn!
alixandria chapter 20 . 1/27/2013
yay! no more Nahuel to make them miserable...
alixandria chapter 19 . 1/27/2013
e tooo!
alixandria chapter 18 . 1/27/2013
oh shit!
alixandria chapter 17 . 1/27/2013
that doesn't sound good?
alixandria chapter 16 . 1/27/2013
oh my!
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