|Reviews for Jacob & Renesmee|
| Guest chapter 24 . 1/15/2015
Amazing! The continuity with the original books was flawless. The story was completely plausible for the series. The writing was exceptionally well done. I am not big on detailed sexual exploits like those in traditional romance novels but it was tastefully & realistically handled here-in my opinion. The J & R story brought closure to a part of the Twilight saga that I felt had been left hanging. I really enjoyed the ending and thought that it was nice that you offered an alternate ending. However, it opens possibilities for a chapter or story of Jacob as a vampire & of course how the Volturi would address either ending if this story. Thank you for writing such a wonderful story.
| twilight fan chapter 24 . 1/9/2015
I really liked this story its different. I loved the original ending. I read the whole thing in one setting. Very good!
| Barbara Simms chapter 23 . 12/30/2014
Thought that this was the true fairy tale ending, Jacob as a vampire was just wrong.
| abby chapter 23 . 12/28/2014
I LOVE this ending. Thank you so much for sharing your words!
| Pee chapter 9 . 12/28/2014
WTF Jacob ! Nooooooooooooo
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| Butt of Gordon chapter 7 . 12/28/2014
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| bn vmfhcmnbbvmvh chapter 2 . 12/28/2014
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| Man boobs pooh chapter 5 . 12/28/2014
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| Dog boy360 chapter 4 . 12/28/2014
Go Jacob you made out with a six year old! ;)
| Guest chapter 3 . 12/28/2014
Yep that's all I got to say ;
| Emmett chapter 2 . 12/28/2014
Jacob why just why breasts seriously?:(
| Luna Lovegood chapter 1 . 12/28/2014
Good job keep doing great fanfic !
| KAT chapter 1 . 12/27/2014
AMAZING, JUST AMAZING. THE BEST SO FAR. WELL, IVE SAT HERE FOR HOURS READING ALL OF THESES... THIS, BY FAR, IS THE BEST.
| Guest chapter 24 . 12/26/2014
I liked the first ending better it gives more closure