Reviews for Jacob & Renesmee
walkergirl13 chapter 24 . 6/16/2013
First let me say I loved your story. I couldn't put it down! Second I'm glad you choose the original ending! It was a good call. As a fellow author you have to take in what your readers want but at the same time will keep them entertained and reading more and more of the story. I love twists and turns and I loved how your story kept me on the edge of my seat. Great job!
Oyena Ngqondela chapter 24 . 6/13/2013
whatever ur name is this fan fiction was AMAZING
katrina.umana chapter 23 . 6/13/2013
Wow! Just awesome! I've read it like 5 times! I hope Stepahnie writes another story about Jacob and Renseme's courtship and marriage! I'm so waiting for that! Your story made me blush and laugh but most of all it made a married mother of 2 happy!
Guest chapter 23 . 5/21/2013
i liked it very much until the "you become human again, Jacob" part. never expected this, nice twist, except for your lack of information. The wolves (i mean, quileute wolves of course) develop until they look like men in their middle twentees, even if they first phased at the age of, let's say 15 years old. First is the height, muscles, a little bit on the features; then the fever sets in; after almost a week of fever, hearing "voices" (the pack voices),etc,comes the phasing; the development goes on (height, strenght, senses, muscles) and the features are more of a young man. In a couple of years, the boy will look like a middle-twenty young man, it depends on the boy's age on first phase to wolf. Also, a member of the pack can give up his wolf if he considers, and start ageing again, but if the tribe is threatened, he can turn again, with the only remark that if he is very old, like 70 let's say, there's a very good chance he couldn't phase back to human, couldn't control the phasing anymore(like a young wolf when is hurt - finds it very difficult to phase back to human. I know all of this because i really am a fan of the pack, and don't like when they're presented differently. if you're a jacob fan you should've known these things...
Guest chapter 24 . 5/21/2013
this is the worst chapter ever! sucks! jacob is and always will be a ,
Guest chapter 24 . 5/21/2013
More please
Guest chapter 24 . 5/21/2013
Wow
Patricia79btint chapter 8 . 5/14/2013
Thank you :-).
Rachel chapter 24 . 4/20/2013
I thought Seth was going to imprint on Jacob's daughter!
SavannahLennon chapter 2 . 3/22/2013
I LOVE it!
serenity143 chapter 2 . 3/18/2013
how about dividing your paragraphs? They're waaaay too long ... I'm getting headaches just reading your story...
Champion of Justice chapter 23 . 3/16/2013
Awesome story! I loved it. This ending was my favorite.
kelsey derousse chapter 1 . 3/11/2013
Awsome chapter its so amazeing . Should be a movie !
reader chapter 1 . 3/4/2013
I loved it. I wish it had more towards the end i wanted more. So loved him being able to turn to a wolf again. Its just not Jacob if he's not.
jupiter2005 chapter 24 . 2/21/2013
i liked the first ending, and like nessie, i cant picture jacob as anything but a werewolf, keep up the good writing.
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