Reviews for Someone We Care About
Sora Tayuya chapter 1 . 5/25
Fair enough telling from your AU canon. Recently as the manga was continued I was delighted to see they actually covered the time Kairi was with Axel and when Saix stole her. It was excitingly similar to what a lot of fanfic authors had written or expressed interest in having happen.
bkwrmnlvnit chapter 1 . 2/2/2013
This is, again, well written. I like the way that you did that with Axel so that it was platonic with him missing Roxas. He's just one of those characters you always feel bad for, and I find it interesting how you had him spew out that outburst of emotions, which was very well put, for the record. And then you have Saix, who comes waltzing in and screws everything up. I really hate that guy... Saix's comments seemed very in canon, as did the actions of all the characters. The ending was also very strong, with how Axel waited until Saix left to reveal his decision to betray the Organization and his old friend. The way you phrase that makes it powerful and seem sort of ominous without this completely screwy "dun-dun-dun" effect. Once again, nice work! Thanks for posting,

Bookworm
xsunny15x chapter 1 . 9/7/2012
Good job :)
I liked this fanfic :)
lapaxlove chapter 1 . 6/16/2012
I wish there was interaction between the two in KH.

And this was very well written, every characters were believable.

Good job!
AlwaysNinja don't wanna login chapter 1 . 2/2/2012
SQUEE! Pure epic, right there. Perfect fill and perfect characters. They seeme just like in the games. I LOVED it!
The Layman chapter 1 . 8/19/2011
Ooh, this is great! I love fill-in stories (not to be confused with filler stories) like this!
Infamousplot chapter 1 . 7/5/2011
I've been looking for something like this, and this was the perfect fic to start off my Axel and Kairi fling. Well written, and delves into the characters and their feelings. I like how you went into Axel's "feelings" about not having emotions, and how he misses Roxas. It was bittersweet. I loved it
one-who-loves-Sesshy chapter 1 . 5/20/2011
cool! keep it up!