|Reviews for If Right Would Always Win|
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/12/2015
Oh my God.
Your writing, oh my God.
It's so GOOD.
I've come back to read this story over and over and over again, and oh my. I just can't.
Usually Zoro is portrayed as a stoic, gruff person who usually doesn't really let his emotions show. At all. Honestly, I can think of some canon events where he' stayed indifferent (or so it seemed) when something heart wrenching was obviously happening
*AHEM* Merry *AHEM* D:
but you've managed to show a different side of Zoro, one that shows that he's human just like the rest of us. I love this because it gives the reader something to RELATE to. Hardships can be, well, hard. To be able to relate and know you're not the only one feeling down or depressed.. For me is nice. Not to know that somebody else in the world is sad, because I would never wish that upon anybody. But it's a feeling of "I'm sure they can fight whatever it is they're fighting - them there's no reason I can't fight too" sort of, if you get what I'm saying. Though it is very obvious Zoro is physically strong, his mental health for all we know could be an absolute wreck. I mean, though in the anime/manga he does seem quite calm but there are those moments when it's focused on most of the other crew members, and though he must not have full-on breakdowns (but I don't know, he could) he could very well be having emotial issues we don't know about. I don't know, let this be food for thought if you've made it this far XD
thanks for the story! I really appreciate you contributing something amazing to this fandom, something I will continue to read over and over. I hope everything is well with you, and thought I'm not sure if it's this story or 'A Cook's Recipe For:' you said you were going through some hard times, and I hope everything has gotten at least a bit better :)
Catch ya later ;)
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/26/2015
That made my heart ache. Zoro CANNOT cry and Chopper CANNOT die.
Otherwise I don't know anymore...
Nice story :3
| nekonesan chapter 2 . 2/26/2014
I feel like I really have to review on this story, because really, your first chapter had me crying pretty much the whole way through, and your second chapter nearly broke something inside. I really like your story, both chapters are really cute in a realy sad kinda way, and I love it, and you deserve some cookies :) great story
| E2n chapter 1 . 5/22/2011
This is really good
| Merucha chapter 2 . 5/21/2011
1: Chopper can't die, ever D: I can't imagine Eichiro being cruel enough to let him die in the anime. EVRYONE has a soft spot for Chopper.
2: Knowing Luffy, if it was possible, he WOULD stretch to heaven. Even if it wasn't possible. Because he's LUFFY.
| Nela chapter 1 . 5/21/2011
Oh my god ;_; the mental image of chopper being shocked was too much TT_TT
Hang in there Choppy
Such a beautiful fic even thought it teared me up to pieces ;~;
You alwys have away to pull on pepole hearts with the way you write 33
| OneShotMarvel chapter 2 . 5/20/2011
Aww. Poor Luffy. I sobbed like crazy when Ace died, so I can only imagine how terrible he must feel. It was cute overall, with a hint of sadness. I loved it. And Zoro -chuckle- He's too cute sometimes. He'd make a great big brother had he been given the chance. And no doubt he's a great friend and lover.
Loved this one as well! :D Keep up he amazing work
| OneShotMarvel chapter 1 . 5/20/2011
It-It's so sad ;n; My heart was aching and I couldn't help but think of a crisis that's happening right now within my family. I completely agree with the last line, the last words Zoro spoke in here. I can only hope that Chopper gets better for him. They deserve to be happy.
Brilliant story! I absolutely loved it.
| RainGoddess2040 chapter 1 . 5/20/2011
Just go on and make me cry some more why don't you? That was so sad and beautiful and sad and just UGH! I love it. I want to marry it. *hands over soul*