|Reviews for Red Ruin, and the Breaking Up of Laws|
| sopmire chapter 8 . 1/28
Of course! He promises! Great story!
| T. Alana M chapter 5 . 1/17
I just noticed this, but the fact that Loki's race is matrilineal makes perfect sense, since mythological Loki was always referred to as Laufeyson, even though Laufey was his mother.
| blackkitty95 chapter 8 . 1/9
Loki, you devil...You wrote him - and his relationship with Thor - very well. This must be the best Thorki mpreg fic around here.
I only have two things to point out: a) why does their child have brown hair and brown eyes? In the films Loki has black hair and green eyes, and Thor has blond hair and blue eyes. If the characters are based on Norse mythology, then again the colours of the child should be different.
b) Laufey is dead, but Loki mentions that he won't be on the throne for long. I'm not sure about the timeline here, but since there are references to Loki's return after falling into the void and to Tony Stark, I suppose the story is set after the Avengers film.
Anyway, despite that, I really, really liked it.
| Rathian Empress chapter 8 . 7/28/2014
Ahhh Loki you
devil. Lol. Yay!
| T. Alana M chapter 1 . 11/3/2013
YUP. TYPICAL LOKI
| stefanswifey01 chapter 4 . 5/31/2013
| stefanswifey01 chapter 3 . 5/31/2013
Loki better behave unless he wants his kid name after
| stefanswifey01 chapter 2 . 5/31/2013
| stefanswifey01 chapter 1 . 5/31/2013
| Anjiera-sama chapter 8 . 5/9/2013
| PhoenixF-SD chapter 8 . 5/5/2013
"...And you shall adopt a life of piety and repentance, and…"
"Of course I shall," Loki soothed, and thrust forward again. "I promise."
Poor Thor, he is so screwed.
| mirtama chapter 8 . 4/16/2013
This story was magically different and I really liked it! Thank you!
| rhodos chapter 1 . 4/4/2013
What a lucky little thing I was to stumble upon this.
Your depiction of Loki is nothing less than perfect.
I love you.
Please continue forever.
| Starshinesoldier chapter 8 . 10/27/2012
heh, oh loki you trololololol! XD
| killing u with umbrellas chapter 8 . 10/15/2012