Reviews for Alone on the Water
SkyeDonovan chapter 1 . 6/7
This is wonderful! Thank you for sharing!
Happy Reader chapter 1 . 3/10
Your writing is absolutely BEAUTIFUL. Keep on writing, always!
I loved the story so much, and I felt like you truly did portray his emotions well. Brilliant characterization.

I just thought I'd leave this review because this fic is lovely, your writing is beautiful and this doesn't have the amount of reviews to do it justice.
pansymoomalfoy32 chapter 1 . 8/25/2016
This hits hard in the heart. Choosing Fa Zhou(you're right, can't shorten it) as your pov character and having him reflect on the ways Mulan might die, or never return...ouch. This is a story that needed to be written, thanks for sharing.
Dwarrior chapter 1 . 8/10/2016
Heart rending, beautifully written story. Well done. Keep up the awesome work...
lychee loving chapter 1 . 1/24/2016
Mulan is my favorite Disney movie (favorite Disney heroine!) and was really important to me as a little girl. I don't think I got to appreciate its darkness (relative to other Disney movies, because it's about war and how ugly war can be) until recent years, and I think you've captured part of that darkness and sadness here. This was really really well written and absolutely did justice to Fa Zhou. We saw his bleakness for a very very short moment in the film (right before Mulan steps up to him when she returns) and I think you've put all his despair into words quite perfectly.

This was great, and I kinda wish you had more!
pistonsfan75 chapter 1 . 9/27/2015
Wow! Powerful! Great writing.
Guest chapter 1 . 4/26/2015
Wah! Brilliant! Thank you for this story!
guest chapter 1 . 2/13/2014
good story
Little Kunai chapter 1 . 12/26/2013
well done
Guest chapter 1 . 11/12/2013
so much angst i can't take it
Guest chapter 1 . 10/10/2013
out of all the disney father's i respect him the most since he had to go through so much during the movie with his little girl in so much danger yet he could not go after her just for her sake plus he nearly loses his daughter three times ( the avalance being discoverd as a woman and the fight with shan yu)
Review chapter 1 . 2/11/2013
very well written and sweet
Cindz Cindz chapter 1 . 12/18/2012
I think you nailed Fa Zhao' character. This is so sad! Nice job again
Guest chapter 1 . 7/3/2012
This is just incredible.
FullMentalPanic chapter 1 . 6/4/2012
In the film, we mostly just get implications of what was going on at home while Mulan was away. I really like you detailing all the precautions taken so people won't realize she's gone, and the very strong possibility of her death that keeps preying on her father.
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