Reviews for Clash of missions
Miley chapter 4 . 10/1
I don't know why but I can't bring myself to like the Naruto of this story. He just seem to go for the carnal pleasure and not caring for Hinata if she consents to it or not. Yes, they had to act but he could have been mild if he did really cared. And the anal just makes me hate him more, cuz for my part, that could have been avoided.

But him being in control of keeping his virginity intact even when living under such a heellhole was so cute and so gentlemanly of him. I really love that aspect of his. Though in my opinion, the story would have been better if Naruto had to train Hinata not because he was being pressurised but because he made the choice to train her instead of handing her off to some lecherous leech.

But still, that's my fantasy and it's already a beautiful and smexy story in itself so you should definitely and absolutely continue this. Hope you get lots of ideas and come out of your super duper writer's block.

I skipped the entire SasuSaku ordeal.
TaniyaW1112 chapter 4 . 6/28
please udpate this is really good
my 2 guys chapter 4 . 1/19
that was good keep the chapters coming
Guest chapter 1 . 11/5/2016
Update please
Guest chapter 4 . 8/24/2016
Are you going to do a new chapter
Nana-chan chapter 1 . 7/16/2016
Hello i have little question...will you someday update this story or my hope is lost ? :'(((
Kamadre2hot chapter 4 . 8/27/2015
When's the next chapter Senpai?
Twinkies4lifes chapter 4 . 7/12/2015
Why did you stop this samazing story along with chronicles of the west? Are you dead or not?
Hatake Kaisa chapter 4 . 5/16/2015
Amazing! Cant wait
AAAllisWell chapter 4 . 5/15/2015
Please continue this!
It's just amazing, i dunno why, but i love stories with dom!naruto x sub!hinata ahahahha

Update soon pleaseee
Ms.camilahigareda chapter 4 . 4/24/2015
Plz finish ,good story
Guest chapter 4 . 2/24/2015
You are a pretty good writer. And this story has a good plot too. Maybe you can hinata be in charge for the surprise. I can't wait for another chapter!
Arasia chapter 4 . 9/18/2014
Writing good smut isn't easy, but I really enjoyed reading yours.
I understand your frustration with your writer's block, I get that a lot too and it's a horrible feeling :(
I hope you got past yours already! I'm still trying to overcome mine haha.
Can't wait to see how your plot develops, and enjoy the lemons in the meantime.
jeana986 chapter 4 . 8/9/2014
What an amazing story. Please continue. :)
SeldomAHero chapter 4 . 7/25/2014
The story is awesome so far. Please continue.
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