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hpnarutardsjedipirate1234 chapter 1 . 11/7/2014
Rock25 chapter 1 . 1/17/2013
i'm very interested in knowing the rest! :)
Fenris Jin chapter 1 . 7/22/2012
That was um.. weird.. well Gaara mostly..XD
24HourHonor chapter 1 . 5/28/2012
Oohhh. This story is interesting. I like Hinata's personality. Can't wait to see what's next. Update soon!
College n Curls chapter 2 . 4/13/2012
I feel like this story has a lot of potential even though I'm not a gaahina fan. Delete this story and rewrite it with your original idea intact (because its awesome). Then do some serious fleshing out for the story line, its very bare bones right now it needs more detailed descriptions and that will help flow the story along better. Next get a friend or a beta reader, they will find mistakes you missed because we're only human! Don't give up on your stories you've got a lot of good ideas you just need more work on your technique! If you need any help hit me up!
nanitaa chapter 3 . 4/7/2012
I'm sure you could just go over and edit them.

This story has alot of potential (:

I'm looking forward to your writing.

Ayumi Rei chapter 1 . 4/7/2012
At first I was skeptical about reading this because of the horrible capitalization and grammar in the summary and title (It usually indicates a amateur writing something that they aren't suited for). I liked the concept but it was way too annoying to read. For starters work on your capitalization, spelling, and grammar (those are the biggest and easiest things to fix, just edit the paper). Second there's a point and time to describe things don't describe the little nit-pick things as to how Sasuke got to the room, it's tedious and boring to read. Third the student list was ill fitting considering how you were going to describe everyone walking in anyways. Fourth the order of things were confusing and quite annoying to decipher. Also the thing that most irritated me was how OC Hinata was. Because of these reasons I will not be reading this again. Also this isn't a flame it's constructive criticism.
sasuhinalove2327 chapter 2 . 8/20/2011
this is so fun to read!i like it cause it has gaahina and sasuhina my most favorite pairings!though it has some spelling errors, ill follow this story!hope you could update soon
Maverick Mega Man X chapter 2 . 8/15/2011
I've read chapter 2... That bastard Sasuke :( trying to take Hinata-chan away from me...

As I said before, I don't see much difference between Gaara and myself... Especially in this fanfic! O_O Did you write this thing with me in mind or what! It's... making me feel I'm THERE... kissing Hinata-chan in front of all those dumb-a$$es... AWESOME! (_O)b Very well-done!
Maverick Mega Man X chapter 1 . 8/15/2011
Gaara is Hinata's boyfriend?... PERFECT PAIRING! I've gotta hand it to you! ;) Did I tell you already how Gaara is SO much like me? Excellent job!... Now I gotta look at chapter 2...
KabeHinata-lover2 chapter 2 . 7/12/2011
Please update! I want more! Ugwgdaae ahhhhh! XD
KabeHinata-lover2 chapter 1 . 7/12/2011
YEAH! I can finally review!

This fic is hot! I like your Hinata in here X] I liked the steamy scenes and I hope read more of them XD
moonlight-star chapter 2 . 6/17/2011
Hum its interesting i like it. keepem comin it really good
Bella-Sakkaku chapter 2 . 6/13/2011
Love It!

Next 1 PLZ
michioka chapter 2 . 5/27/2011
r u in hurry when u type it down? if u can try to edit it a bit.. There s a few mistake that s quite confusing...
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