|Reviews for While we're on the topic of space|
| Ender NightBlade chapter 1 . 8/6
Hahaha vengeance on Trollestia!
| ChuckNorris'ssister chapter 1 . 8/5/2015
Oooooooooooh luna, you slick motherfuckerXD
Never change luna, never change
| SmartGirl333 chapter 1 . 3/17/2015
for the love of god
PORTAL PONIES PURE GOLD
| Anonymous chapter 1 . 11/19/2014
XD That was the perfect thing to do those two cores!
| Keighlyn chapter 1 . 9/5/2013
Well ok dennn its really funny plees write more
| Adventure Sphere chapter 1 . 2/24/2013
So, this is what happened to those two, huh? NEVER MIND ABOUT THE CORE ORBITING AROUND THE SUN, HUH?! GET ME OUT OF HERE, I'M GOING TO OVERHEAT!
| Petchricor chapter 1 . 1/29/2013
Luna you little jerk XD
| TwilightSky15 chapter 1 . 1/27/2013
Awsome! Plz continue!
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/29/2012
I don't know if your aware but the reason aperture was still abandoned in portal 2 and everything looks like an apocalypse was due to the combine invasion from the half-life seires which is directly connected to the portal universe as they are one and the same. So a dragon apocalypse would be fairly impossible, seeing as how earth is currently home to a military so advanced with weapons so powerful that only an army of millions of highly armed gorilla warfarers could combat without being obliterated.
| Twilit Feline chapter 1 . 1/9/2012
This story is awesome. I love the note Luna left. Its like saying,
"Hey Tia. Some strange beings that we know absolutely nothing about came to Equestria last night! And I thought it would be a great idea to bring them into Canterlot
Anyway love the story.
| the good dr chapter 1 . 10/12/2011
LOL Trollestia got trolled.
signed the good dr.
| xxxinactive chapter 1 . 8/20/2011
I enjoyed this. Wheatley and Luna have so much in common. LAWL
| AzureOptical chapter 1 . 6/26/2011
Hmmm. I'm going to be honest with this one.
The story is fairly entertaining, the plot itself is chuckle-worthy.
Luna and Space Core are done quite well, much better than it could have been. The only thing that irks me is that Wheatley's characterization could have been better written. I just can't really imagine him saying a lot of the dialogue you gave him. And what I mean by that is, your heart's in the right spot but the extra mile goes ungone. Take my view with a grain of salt, however. I'm just a big stickler on realistic dialogue.
I like the detail you have about the cores being able to turn on their own, it's certainly something unique, for lack of a better word.
The note Luna wrote to her sister at the end is a well enough rounded, if not slightly funny, ending.
There should be an epilogue to this. Wheaters and Space get jobs in the castle or around Ponyville, and Wheatley being Wheatley, and Space Core being... Space Core, you could write a nice comedy, something like a novelette. I would certainly enjoy it!
| Star1412 chapter 1 . 6/25/2011
amazing! i never would have thought to mix My Little Pony and Portal. It's funny. I like the orb that's obsessed with space.
| Lord Arcturus chapter 1 . 6/14/2011
Okay, I admit it, I laughed.
There gonna be more to this?