Reviews for A Chance to Change
Typhlosion8 chapter 5 . 11/26/2014
Good story, but Yellow is a girl.
Guest chapter 4 . 3/30/2012
That was a very good story. You will go far as an author.
Guest chapter 4 . 3/30/2012
That was a very good story. You will go far as an author.
Guest chapter 5 . 2/20/2012
I really enjoyed it! Please make more like it! ;)
Phillip the Shinx chapter 1 . 7/30/2011
Lance: I ain't cute!

Lol, I could just imagine Lance screaming that in front of the Dex Holders. Great story!
PreciousAll chapter 5 . 6/21/2011
Bwahaha.. ya! what the? u mentioned my penname again! *shy* btw, thanks XP

I'm so sad the story has to be ended. your story's good! i feel like it's too soon to be ended. lance turned good, great! and your explaination's clear. i think i understand why you add larvitar to this story. hahaha.. good job, pals!
Asmie chapter 4 . 6/14/2011
I just read your newest chapter, and reviews too. Hope their critics won't upset you. You have your own logic. Lance changed his mind quite fast, but I think it 's normal. When he was a human, he wad leader of E4, who had many strong Pokemon in his hand. But he failed, and then turned into a Pidgey. But not an ordinary Pidgey. He is a weak little Pidgey which can't fly, doesn't know any move and almost eaten by an Ekans, not count live in his enemies's mercy too. Too much happened to Lance in short time. I read somewhere that the life change when we changed, and Lance is facing the biggest change in his life (maybe XD). So of coz he changes.

I noticed you wrote: "Can it be because I didn't use my power properly? Did the Viridian Forest disapprove my plan to exterminate human race for PoKéMoN sake?" It made sense and explained many things.

Are all those things happen in just one day? If yes, it 's quite fast. I think 7-10days is suiter.

You should add more explanations so the readers can understand your logic. And lenghthen new chapters too. ;) I 'm still in love with this story. (And your other story too).

Good luck!
PokemonTrainerYellow chapter 4 . 6/13/2011
Nice. Another good continue of the manga!
An Author's Pen chapter 4 . 6/12/2011
I enjoy this story, and I have it on my story alert, but I do not agree with it. However much of a villain manga Lance is his most defining trait is that he cares for his Pokemon. I really can't see Lance training his Pokemon as badly as a rocket grunt. Also he seems to swing from high self worth (I, Lance the leader of Elite Four) to low self esteem (Why am I so useless?) Lances thoughts just don't seem to fit the character at all. I'm starting to lose interest in the story. It's just not really Lance. That's all I guess.
PreciousAll chapter 4 . 6/11/2011
Uhm, it feels awkward since u know who..

nevertheless, ur story just interesting. kekeke.. i like the plot. i like lance too. xp

but, i doubt green could smile while say that line in that situation.

it's getting interesting! if arceus is mentioned, i wonder if that mysterious pokemon is darkrai.. yes or no? xp

and, that's a line i like on chap2 about lance's thought. bwahaha.. ask dragonite to teach him fly!

i look frwd for the update. it's pity if u end it on chap5...
Anonymous reader chapter 4 . 6/10/2011
The story overall is kinda cute and all, but I guess Lance changed his perceptive too fast... i mean, there should be a lot more of conflict in his mind, like, let's say...

"Human should die! How could these puny human treat me like this? I'm the greatest trainer that has ever live and now I have to live at their mercy? I'll get you back soon when I turn back to a human..." blah blah and so on.

And well... its a bit bizarre to see all his long-life perceptive change in one day.

But keep on writing anyway, I'll be waiting!
SilverRose1022 chapter 4 . 6/10/2011
another great story :)

cant wait till the next chapter

keep up the good work
Asmie chapter 3 . 6/5/2011
Wow, another update! - And this chapter is so win like previous chapters.

"Gee thank you Blue. It's not that good yet," said Yellow as she is blushing" - you meant "he", right? Since Lance considered Yellow is a boy.

Please please please write more!
Asmie chapter 2 . 5/30/2011
Wooow, this story is so hilarious! I love how you portrayed our characters, exactly like in PkSP.

"Huh! How dare you! Of course I can't fly, I'm a human not a Pidgey duh! If I'd known this would happen, I would have asked my Dragonite first to teach me how to fly."

And this:

""Hey, why are you glaring at me? That Pikachu is your opponent, not me," said Green"

made me laugh so hard! ))

Plz keep up the good work! I 'm looking forward to the next chapters!
NobukoXxXAkira chapter 1 . 5/21/2011
This is a good story so far. It's rather interesting and I would like to see what happens next. I'm excited for your update. )