|Reviews for Pokemon: Try it again Ash! Kanto|
| billy chapter 1 . 2/27
hey, what's taking so long with the updates? it's been more then 2 months already. also, i think that ash and bianca or however you spell her name should have a baby already; may and dawn should have sex as well
| ScamanderLovegood chapter 6 . 2/23
I got to chapter six. The story was fairly will written with a few mistakes. The pacing is a bit fast for a normal story, some spacing and filler would help. Think about it like a pokemon episode, there is a lot of conversation and lead up before the climax happens. Climax should have a faster pace than the build-up to build suspense but with the fast pace to begin with, you can't do that. The battle against Forrest was bad. There's no other way I can put it. The moves themselves were realistic but there was no suspense, every pokemon went down in one or two hits when they really shouldn't have. There were no strategies or use of surrounding or anything resembling skill in the characters. No description of the field, explosions or crashing attacks. It was bland and quick. That's all I can really say for it, which is a very big shame and the main reason I have stopped reading at chapter six. You can't write pokemon fanfiction without decent battles.
| Guest chapter 40 . 2/20
come on i am very happy with ivysaur also i m going to make it ivysaur in my fanfic also.
Yes i am also making my fanfiction.
If u ever need help in writing chapter or grammer then u can msg me my pen name is nitin12scorpio
| Guest chapter 28 . 2/20
whoa brother you need alot work in grammer and presentation
| ChipmunkRaccoon chapter 54 . 1/19
If you decide to go back to doing a Pokemon/Transformers fanfic, I have an idea of Autobot/Decepticon lineups that you could use-
the Fallen (Megatron/Galvatron's master)
Prime I (Orion Pax/Optimus Prime II's ancestor)
*Sentinel Prime (DOTM appearance with G1 Alpha Trion's wisdom)
*Orion Pax/Optimus Prime II
*Jazz (Elite Guard)
*Prowl (Cyber-Ninja Corps)
*Hot Rod/Hot Shot/Rodimus
*Dinobots (originally Lightning Strike Coalition)
*Aerialbots (combine into Superion)
*Omega Supreme: Ship mode is the Ark.
**Slipstream: Starscream's sarcastic sister
*Constructicons (combine into Devastator)
*Vehicons (cars, jets, tanks, helicopters)
*Trypticon: Ship mode is the Nemesis.
And Nemesis Prime in some form.
| Guest chapter 54 . 1/12
Can you please update I really want to know what happens
| Dray237 chapter 54 . 1/6
like it so far...
| Neros Urameshi chapter 54 . 12/17/2013
OH, no! Now Ash anOh, noO
| Neros Urameshi chapter 53 . 12/17/2013
Yikes! Zombie Pokemon! This is freaky!
Great work on this. I wonder if Ash could capture another ghost Pokemon or two?
| billy chapter 54 . 12/16/2013
ash and bianca should have a child together at some point
| AAeon chapter 54 . 12/16/2013
| linkkirby8692 chapter 54 . 12/15/2013
Now just wait a minute, Dr. Fuji died after the creation of Mewtwo in the first movie.
| Ultrabots8 chapter 54 . 12/15/2013
Keep it up factor, this just keeps getting better and better.
By the way, I know what you are planning
| NodokaLover chapter 54 . 12/15/2013
is ash gonna use gulpiin
| ChipmunkRaccoon chapter 53 . 12/15/2013
Do you plan to introduce "Mega Evolutions" in your series at all or not? Just curious.