|Reviews for Guilty Conscience|
| Phineas Redux chapter 1 . 5/29/2011
This is Brilliant! An extremely well-written story. It captures Xena’s guilt in a very realistic way. Her pain and dreams are extraordinarily well shown. The story is perfectly written to capture the events in all their drama. I especially like your use of short sharp sections, and the out-of-step chronology. The intensity of emotion, on both women’s part, is amazingly well portrayed.
As Korkyra says, this is the best by far of your short pieces I have read.
| Korkyra chapter 1 . 5/25/2011
really good piece, possibly the best you have written. It had depth, courage and compassion. I loved the relationship between the two of them and the fact Xena's dreams were torturing her her so much yet Gabrielle made her see the truth. excellent story.
| Silvermoonlight GJ chapter 1 . 5/23/2011
Very deep piece and I very interesting look at the thin line between killing and murder and the consequences involved. I like that Gabrielle was able to drag Xena from herself at the end because I could really see her going through with it.
| HAZMOT chapter 1 . 5/21/2011
Nice guilt trip for Xena. It's not usually her style to give in to her nightmares. She has killed before in self defense, but not a child so young. Gabrielle did a great job of convincing Xena that this so called child was a killer, regardless of what age she was. She would have killed those innocent people and thought nothing of slaying Xena. Thank goodness Gabrielle's pain won out more than Xena's. :D
| Stardawn19 chapter 1 . 5/20/2011
Interesting concept. I loved the interaction between Xena and Gabrielle, especially at the end when Gabrielle's words rang so true. It reminded me of FIN a bit, and what kinda of pain Gabrielle was in after Xena has been killed.