This is a really well done one-shot! I like how you portrayed Phillip as a hopeful, desperate and determined man of God. A man who loves Syrena so much that he has dedicated, what is sure to be his last moment to her. That shows how selfless he is an how much she has impacted him. Great job!

Is that it for this story? Or are you going to keep working on it?

Very nice work )

This is pretty nice, but I don't remember it being sunny or even daytime when he finds her? In fact, I'm about 99.99% sure it was nighttime.

I really like this. What a pleasure to read.

This was wonderful, I really hope you continue it!

This ship is made of win. The movie is made of fail for not telling us what happens with them. AND you are wonderful for having written not one, but TWO fics for Syrena/Philip. Quite beautifully, I might add. :)

It was really good! You should definitely continue this! (:

Hey. Loved the story. It is really well written. Is there going to be more? If there is I'm really looking forward to it. :)

Very good! I hope you continue!

Much love!

C.G.

That was cool! I love how we get to see what he was thinking. Will you continue? I hope so!