Reviews for OC characters wanted
A.C. Toy chapter 1 . 2/25/2013
Name: Yu-Mei Lao
Gender: Female, straight
Romance: yes, Not to anyone Hispanic please (not to be racist or anything, it's just that their accents annoy me a bit)
Nickname: none preferably, but if needed, Mei
Occupation: Student at DWMA
Breed: Weapon, dual Katanas
Age: 16
Level: Two star weapon (**)
Personality: She is stubborn, slightly violent, but caring. She is a bit of a klutz and is pretty motherly towards people she gets close to. If you insult her friends while she is around, she WILL hurt you. She is pretty carefree and kind of odd, but people like her anyway. She has a fetish with anime and makes references that people that don't watch anime don't understand. She is also extremely protective of Death the Kid (explained in bio) and has a personal space issue ( Like Japan from Hetalia).
Appearance: She is a Chinese girl with long, straight, dark brown hair that is up in bun on both sides of her head with two braids coming out of each one, bangs across her for-head and hazel eyes. Her skin is a light tan color and she has a dragon tattoo on her right hip/lower back. He body is curvy and she has full, rosy lips. Overall she is very attractive.
Clothes: A long white shirt that goes to her mid-thighs with red trim about three inches thick on the round collar, ends of the sleeves, and the bottom of the shirt(kind of like Holo's). She has a red belt on her waist with a skull on the left of it. She wears black pants underneath which are tucked into leather boots with a skull on the side of the right one.
Height: Around 5"7
Bio: She grew up in a palace, but is not a spoiled princess. She has been trained in Martial Arts since she was six and is a really skilled fighter. She can fight with any type of asian weapon and speak fluently in Chinese, Japanese, Korean, and Vietnamese. When she was 13 she had a crush on a servant and as a result she was banished from her house and the servant boy was executed. She struggled to survive and nearly died when Death the Kid found her and took her to the DWMA where she was enrolled.
Likes: ramen, anime, manga, the color green, things that are defeated easily, strawberries, humor, cute things, good artists, traveling, Japan, fantasy books, books overall, sleep, being in control, cherry blossom trees, cleanliness(not a clean freak), romance, fairy tales, explosions, dogs, vocaloid music
Dislikes: the color pink, tomatoes, eggplant, mushrooms, papaya, companions dying, annoying people, injuries, stalkers, her parents, Hello Kitty, perverts, hypocrites, when people call her things like 'chica, nina, girl, babe, baby' unless it's meant to be respectful
Alternative Outfit: Traditional Chinese dress, red with a dragon pattern on the back, gold trim and designs. She takes her hair out of the buns when she wears this dress and by then it is curly and has a flower on the side of her head. her shoes are plain Chinese style black flats and she carries a black fan.
Additional Info: Always has kunai and shiriken hidden in her belt and is typically serious, she can take thing as a threat easily and is suspicious/wary of people she doesn't know. Allergic to cats and bee stings.
The Unknown Twinkie chapter 1 . 7/20/2011
These are my OC

Name: Kyoukou

Name meaning: Murder.

Gender: Male

Last name: Leon

Age: 15

Hair color: Red, yellow, orange, purple, white, green, blue (think about a fire that what his hair is like.)

Eye color: Violet purple (with a scorpion shape pupil.)

Soul color: Darkness Purple

Personality: Never really talk to people, very protective of his two partners, would get his way one way or another, love to be alone, hate making friends even if they want to be, Serious, never stop looking for his sister and really hates killing witches (only when he needs to).

Likes: Hating people, being alone, witches, and training.

Dislikes: Thief, people who want to get rich, killing witches, and annoying person.

Hobby: Looking for his sister.

History: His mother was the Skull witch, who married a Meister. When he was born his mother wanted to make him a weapon to protect and hide the fact that he was a son of a witch. When his sister Angela was born he was 7 years old, his mother and father were killed by a witch named Medusa, and so he is left to take care of Angela, Kataki and Ebisu, when Angela was kidnapped, he went crazy just to find her. He enrolled in DMWA so he can have a place to stay and to find his sister.

Parring: Blair

Partner: Kataki and Ebisu

Soul Resonance Ability: Black Tears

Magic theme: Scorpion (his eyes is the source for his magic)

Class: Meister and a Witch.

How does your character meet Typhon? They Meet because he was assign as a partner for a project.

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Name: Ebisu

Name meaning: Savage

Gender: Female

Last name: Skull

Age: 14

Hair color: Dark purple on the top, dark green in the middle and dark red on the bottom.

Eye color: Black

Soul color: Darkness Red

Personality: She is quiet and mostly with her twin sister, she is really out-spoken when she needs to be, and she’s a quick problem solver.

Likes: Being quiet, Being with her twin, Fighting, Rainy days, Darkness, Reading Crona poem, Solve puzzles, play board games, and reading depressing stories.

Dislikes: Loud people, Sunny days, being separated from her twin, happy stories, People all together, and making friends.

Hobby: Reading Crona poem, reading depressing story, Walking in the rain without a rain coat, and solving puzzles.

History: Like her sister, she was also created by Kyoukou parents.

Parring: None

Partner: Kyoukou and Kataki

Soul Resonance Ability: Black Tears

Class: Weapon (sword)

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Name: Kataki

Name meaning: Revenge

Gender: Female

Last name: Skull

Age: 14

Hair color: Black with red and purple highlight.

Eye color: Red

Soul color: Black

Personality: Even though her name means Revenge, she is really kind and open hearted, love meeting new people, and love to mess around and play pranks, but when someone is picking on her twin sister that is when she gets mad and no one wants to mess with her.

Likes: Pulling Pranks, Collecting pictures (any type), taking care of her twin, and hanging out with her friends.

Dislikes: Bullies, People who want their way,

Hobby: Pulling Pranks, Collecting pictures, Drawing, Reading Adult Romance books and listening to music.

History: She wasn’t born, but was created by Kyoukou parents when he was one years old.

Parring: None

Partner: Kyoukou and Ebisu

Soul Resonance Ability: Black Tears

Class: weapon (shield)
akairu tamashii chapter 1 . 6/6/2011
Akairus weapon form is basicly like a scythe just the blace is a full crecent and attached by a chain

dont know if i already posted this cuz the last one didnt show up
akairu tamashii chapter 4 . 6/6/2011
oops i forgot to mention what kind of weapon she was.

She is a staff like metal pole tht can realese a chain with a crecent shaped blade at the end.
akairu tamashii chapter 4 . 6/6/2011
still accepting?

Name:Akairu Tamashii

Age:16

Gender:Female

ROUGE WEAPON

Personality:Calm,Cool, most of the time anyway other than that she is absolutely Random Lazy and likes to be on the outside of things and never fully commits her time to also is good at swindling(sp?)theivery(sp?)and deceiving.

Appearance:She dresses like a no shirt just bindings covering her bust a black cloak/jacket hanging over her shoulders with the kanji for leader splattered in red paint on the black skinnyjeans tucked into black combat blue waist length hair and porcelain pale skin high contrast to neon green her back is a tatto made of a series of long unconnected flowing lines that forms a wolf(back facing you with its head turned left left paw on left shoulder right paw on right shoulder blade going down its tail swoops around below the waistline down to the left hip)

Pairing:...

She met Typhon by pure coincedence

she was pretty chill with the whole situation she finds their intentions good and thinks their doing the right thing

[this reminds me of an RP i did called the weapon rebellion]
akairu tamashii chapter 4 . 6/6/2011
still accepting?

Name:Akairu Tamashii

Age:16

Gender:Female

ROUGE WEAPON

Personality:Calm,Cool, most of the time anyway other than that she is absolutely Random Lazy and likes to be on the outside of things and never fully commits her time to also is good at swindling(sp?)theivery(sp?)and deceiving.

Appearance:She dresses like a no shirt just bindings covering her bust a black cloak/jacket hanging over her shoulders with the kanji for leader splattered in red paint on the black skinnyjeans tucked into black combat blue waist length hair and porcelain pale skin high contrast to neon green her back is a tatto made of a series of long unconnected flowing lines that forms a wolf(back facing you with its head turned left left paw on left shoulder right paw on right shoulder blade going down its tail swoops around below the waistline down to the left hip)

Pairing:...

She met Typhon by pure coincedence

she was pretty chill with the whole situation she finds their intentions good and thinks their doing the right thing

[this reminds me of an RP i did called the weapon rebellion]
blackbloodbaby chapter 3 . 5/30/2011
Yay! Thanks for including Rain! Means a lot to me! I can't wait to read the story.
WingedHero540 chapter 3 . 5/29/2011
Please tell me that Aero will at least come in later.

P.S. I only count eight people.
Charlotte Faraday chapter 3 . 5/29/2011
Eh, I'm kinda sad that Yukari didn't get in, but I'm sure it'll be a good story. :)
rockergurl95 chapter 1 . 5/24/2011
Name: Erin J. Dawson

Age: 18

Gender: Female

Kishin, Witch or rouge Weapon: Weapon (Brass knuckles)

Personality: if she's angry or insulted, she doesn't let you know. She'll act perfectly normal so you can't tell if she's pissed or not. That's her revenge. she doesn't mind conflictt but she does hate it when people blame her for stuff. She is very stubborn, and has little common sense. Her curiosity will usually get the best of her

Appearance: she wears a a layerd outfit. Longsleeve light green shirt with a shortsleeve blueshift over it with the hoodie on and her brown hair down, she also wears blue jeans

Pairing: she really likes Death the Kidd but if not then surprise me :) (she's straight)

Just to also say how does your character meet Typhon? How do they react to him and what do they think of him. This helps me build the bonds between characters: She meets him at the schoooooool. She thinks he's a hotshot, why does HE get to be the one to save the world? What makes HIM so special?

Okay! I'm done! :3
HikaruVolcanoFlame chapter 2 . 5/24/2011
Maybe Crona has a big brother named Hatsui (cause in the myth Medusa has a son named pegasus and Hatsui is the chinese name for pegasus) who has long purple hair and looks like a lady. he would use a black blood Demon spear called Woeden but would have Zs instead of Xs
animazing23 chapter 2 . 5/24/2011
yay! love it! can't wait for the rest!
xNewWaveBossanova chapter 1 . 5/24/2011
Name: Leviathan Luna Gorgon

Age: 800

Gender: Female

Kishin, Witch or rouge Weapon: Owl witch

Personality: Luna usually has an evil, cold and selfish personality, but secretly she is a more warm-hearted type than her sisters. Has a high level of arrogance. Polite and formal way of speaking. Her behavior is very clear and very different varied. Suffers from psychopathy due to her past. It’s almost impossible to discover if she lies through her disorder and she lies about almost everything. She can read people like books according to herself. She often has mood swings between cheery, on a teasing and annoying way, and calm but grumpy. Is unable to follow any life path and is often just playing and teasing her opponent cause she likes that. Has the habit to slaughter everyone who gets in her way. She likes to provoke her enemies and call on battles.

Appearance: Luna relatively tall woman with nice shaped body forms and looks really young for her age. While she’s over 800 years old her appearance only looks like one of a woman in her mid-twenties. Her body is agile and thin making it perfect for closer combats. Her facial features consist of eyes colored yellow with pitch black pupils. Her eyes are pretty narrow and almost always relaxed. Her hair is raven-black that is quite straight. Her fringe is long and almost covers her eyes. Her hair falls to her shoulders and the bottom is in some way spiky. She has two long side bangs that fall along her chin. Luna has various outfits and clothing swaps through the series but has two notable ones. First, her teacher clothing. These consist; a black waist coat with a white blouse underneath it. She wears black trousers and simple black shoes. She carries and magic book with her, a Grimoire, and she wears a necklace shaped in a crescent moon. Second, her witches clothing. These consist; a black top and pants. Again the simple black shoes and the necklace. She also wear a torn black cloak and still carries the magic book. Stands around 5’8 ft

Pairing: Has a crush on a certain professor...
K.Se7en.L chapter 1 . 5/24/2011
Name: Lilo and Stitch

Age: 15.5 and don’t you forget it!

Gender: Male and Female

Kishin, Witch or rouge Weapon: Kishin weapon (the urumi coil sword). They are able to switch who is meister and weapon at anytime. They are one soul together.

Personality: Lilo & stitch are witty, energetic, class clown type of people; they are the type of people that will grow on you …eventually. They have a high tendency to be annoying but only to the ones they love. You rarely see them not talking, joking, or smirking but when they are silent there there’s a big problem.

Appearance: Lilo wears a long sleeved blue shirt with yellow stripes that hangs off the shoulders and covers her hands. She has on yellow short shorts and blue high tops. Stitch wears a long sleeved yellow shirt with blue stripes that also hands off his shoulders and covers his hands. He wears blue shorts that hang below his knee and yellow high tops. They both have brown skin, white hair, and siliver eyes.

Pairing: uh…if a person is able to have both of them be their lovers then anyone I guess.

how does your character meet Typhon? Lilo and stitch were hiding in the tress making mooing sounds at random pass by-ers when a “ghost” passed by them. They wanted to capture him and make him be their new pet so they followed him. As they were hiding on the branch with rope the branch broke and the fell on/in front of the “ghost”.

How do they react to him? They like following him around. Since he’s the only person they talked to in a long time besides each other. They love to annoy him through but they count on him to.

what do they think of him? Lilo: I think he’s cool but I know were kooler! No im kidding but did you know he talk’s Ghost aren’t supposed to TALK.

Stitch: Uh…..he’s okay for now but seriously he needs to be eaten lucky charms like we do! There magical. If he would just give them a try I know he would be like Homes is to Watson. One far out dude yo.
blackbloodbaby chapter 2 . 5/24/2011
I wanna read more!

Please hurry and update! 'Tis amazing!
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