Reviews for Fiercer than a Legendary
KittyAttack chapter 16 . 9/14/2011
Wonderful chapter, I'm reading this at 10:00 pm while I'm supposed to be doing a crapload of homework. Way to go, Kitty!

The battle was intense, and craftly written, perhaps better then the crap they call battling in BW. Good show, good sir!
Slight Negative chapter 16 . 9/11/2011
RYAN HIGA REFERENCE! Excellent battle chapter. Stinks that Paul and dawn is more popular than Dawn and BArry but oh well. Keep up the good work. Also, is N or anyon from unova gonna show up?
ClarinetOverlord chapter 11 . 9/10/2011
Multitasking FF stories is a bitch. Finish this first (sorry about the language).
Rider5001 chapter 16 . 9/9/2011
Ok you need to work on spelling. Lots of error. And gengar wouldn't be god _. He would be chuck Norris... Or at least a little...okay maybe not XD. Now continue the story for I am waiting :.
Ensuing chapter 16 . 9/8/2011
Great chapter! The battle was obviously well thought out, and I loved the shippyness between Ash and May near the end. Lucario is obviously very powerful, I can't wait to see him battle in future chapters! And I love the way you have Gengar's personality :D Playful and mischievous is how I envision them. :D

Great story, great chapter, please update soon!

Theguythatmightbeyou chapter 16 . 9/8/2011
Who is the Rick Astley of pokemon?
Capt. Roger chapter 15 . 8/31/2011
Lily does it again! I came here after reading her review of the fic . I think the later chapters aren't as good as the first few, where it was more about Ash's relationship and May/Dawn catfight, rather than about Ash becoming a hero and what not.
ClarinetOverlord chapter 10 . 8/26/2011
A nice, long chapter like this is pleasently relaxing. It's a nice chapter and a good story.

ClarinetOverlord chapter 9 . 8/25/2011
Gible is the Chuck Norris of the Pokemon universe. And there was a tiny bit of fluff here, so it's a good chapter.

KittyAttack chapter 15 . 8/24/2011
Niceeee. Poor Dawn!

Cliffhangers are not cool. Update!

...I don't know the significance, but I wouldn't win anything anyways? I FEEL LIKE IVE WON!
Slight Negative chapter 15 . 8/23/2011
I shouldn't be surprised at another great update. Wasn't expecting the lake of rage stuff with Suicune. I have an idea but i'll message it to you later
E-123 Omega mk2 chapter 15 . 8/20/2011
I should have reviewed this LONG ago... I like the way the story's come along and I have to say, it would be... interesting to see how all the girls Ash managed to steal the hearts from would interact with each other... And pretty clever reference with Dawn; I suppose if Ash gets a hospital room he'll be in room #025?
Theguythatmightbeyou chapter 15 . 8/20/2011
393 refers to piplip's pokedex number
Slight Negative chapter 14 . 8/4/2011
T_T I was worried for a while that this would turn into a Contest Shipping Story. I sense some Ikari Shipping to my sadness. Twinleaf is what i prefer but it's your story. I know how you feel about writers block though. I have had it for the past 2 months for my Advanced shipping story
megamanxzeroaxel chapter 14 . 8/3/2011
Love itttt XD
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