Reviews for Fiercer than a Legendary
TheEpicChicken chapter 13 . 7/19/2011
Awesome as always! I can't wait untill you update again. And im almost certain that its Drew.
AshMayShipping chapter 12 . 7/19/2011
Hi! I just wanted to say this is one of the best and most interesting AdvanceShippings stories I have read at keep at it! Nothing much to say but keep up the good work and keep updating! Don't ever stop!
megamanxzeroaxel chapter 12 . 7/18/2011
Awesome chapter! but you miss spell Pokémom I saw " Pokémom" In the start of the chapter. Still great story!
ss4gogeta27 chapter 12 . 7/15/2011
Interesting I guess Dawn and May can't bury the hatchet no matter how hard they try let's hope Ash can make it through the Battle Frontier in one piece and with his sanity intact and maybe Pikachu will get over its ketchup addiction
KittyAttack chapter 12 . 7/15/2011
I'm not surprised Charizard is at the top.

Dawn! You need to stop being so mean to little May ;; heartless!

Misty! Misty! Let it be Misty! Like she'll try to turn her gay xD
ArzackFics chapter 12 . 7/14/2011
Well its going to be either Harley or Drew, those are the only two people that could give May problems after all.
Slight Negative chapter 12 . 7/14/2011
Uhhh. Chocolate covered in Bacon sounds gross...

It think the person could be either

A) The leader of Team Rocket, Giovanni


B) The leader of Team Plasma, N.

THat'd be an interesting character to have introduced to the story. I always thought of N as a BA leader. ALso, maybe Ash could finally catch a legendary Pokemon like Kyurem, Zekrom, Reshiram, Cobbalion, Verizion, or some other legendary pokemon from Unova becase just about every one from Unova is boss. Make Ash and May use Victini and Kyurem in a battle. Just a suggestion though. Great update as usual. Keep up the good work
ReverseSceptile chapter 12 . 7/14/2011
Smashing performance! Jolly good story and brilliant chapter.

If I had to guess though who Dawn called...Brock or Drew!
ArzackFics chapter 11 . 7/12/2011
I really like your way of writing, waiting for more chapters, this story is awesome
Slight Negative chapter 11 . 7/9/2011
Man i loved that Advanced Shipping Episode "The Bicker The Better"

I thought that Pikachu wasn't gonna pull through :/ Y u make it so intense? Just kidding, Intensity is epic. I appreciate the kind word :) Keep up the good work
TheSadPanda chapter 11 . 7/9/2011
I have to say I am really exited to see what happens later in this story. This is the ONLY fanfic I come back to check if its updated. Stay awesome!
Advanced Faith chapter 11 . 7/9/2011
please focus on this story! It's amazing and I'd love to see what happens next! It's got an amazing plot line, absolutely love it! :)
redxridingxhood chapter 11 . 7/8/2011
This is awesome.. So i guess, focus on it? :)
AshMayShipping chapter 11 . 7/8/2011
Great story! Just finished Chapter 11 and I think it's a really great story as it doesn't give away too many hints about AdvanceShipping but still shows some signs of it.

...What i'm trying to say is, your story involves adventure AND AdvanceShipping. Some other stories give away too much of the cheesy stuff but your story also has Ash competing in Battle Facilities, May and Dawn fighting each other over Ash as well as having May and Dawn enter contests too!

Keep it up!
KittyAttack chapter 11 . 7/7/2011
Nice chapter! But I do feel bad for Pikachu...

You should do whatever you think is best. If that's focusing on one story, do that. If you feel more comfortable multitasking, do that.
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