|Reviews for Taken|
| jk chapter 40 . 11/7/2015
and now bella has hiv...great
its a possiliity!
| jk chapter 37 . 11/7/2015
now bellas trying to find the whore? wtf?
| jk chapter 33 . 11/7/2015
you just keep making it worse! No one wants to read about Edward crying that his whore died!
| jk chapter 32 . 11/7/2015
I hope Heidi is "gone" cause there is just no more story is theres a kid...bellla can not be a step mom to the kid that was created when he CHEATED on her...no fucking way
| jk chapter 29 . 11/7/2015
ummmmm just when bella does the RIGHT thing then you turn that shit around and have her say she just needs time to think...are you fucking kidding me?
no! bella should leave his ass! and never think about Edward again!
| jk chapter 28 . 11/7/2015
in chapter 28 he says once again I have lost bella, but this time its my fault...
um wasn't your fault the last two times to? ummmmyes, yes it was!
Edwards a douche bag
| jk chapter 17 . 11/7/2015
ohh how cute he thinks hes fighting for the woman he cheated on and lied to...how honorable!
yaaa not really...don't care about Edward in this story hes a nasty used up piece of shit!
| jk chapter 13 . 11/7/2015
why so much from Edwards pov? I don't even care about his character in this story...I don't care that hes been kidnapped, I don't care that hes being hurt...I just don't give a fuck because in this story I don't like him. he cheated on bella and lied about it...continued to lie about it. he got that whore pregnant, he cheated without a condom and he may think the std tests checked out but hes fuckin wrong I know for a fact that hiv can test negative for months! and he didn't give it thought and still slept with bella! she could have aids right now! and on top of all of that shit he got that skank pregnant!
| jk chapter 10 . 11/7/2015
aro should send bella tht video so bella can see what a piece of shit Edward is.
he crossed a line and she should never forgive him...but she doesn't really know that he did in fact cheat on her..alllll night and loved every second of it...the pos
| jk chapter 7 . 11/7/2015
ya he got tested within hours of having unprotected sex with a stranger...but I'm pretty damn sure that a lot of things wouldn't even show up positive yet seeing as it was only a couple hours ago...and I know for a fact that hiv could take up to 6 months for a positive..so hes just gonna put bella at risk huh? nice
| Comrade'sRoza chapter 52 . 9/11/2015
Your story is absolutely fantastic. But I completely hate Bella. I mean how selfish is she-" You left me, you cheated on me , I was in the hospital' ... Does she love him or not? Edward suffered such a lot just for the sake of keeping her safe, tried to be a better man for her. When Bella wanted time and Edward approached him she was livid. And when Edward asks for space and time she is all the more livid. How hypocritical! Doesn't she have eyes? When Edward was wounded and in the hospital she was scared of him and just accused him. And she doesn't even realize how much Edward tried to meer her when she was in the hospital. I get that Edward's mistake was the catalyst to all this but he PAID.
I am sorry for ranting like this. But I just can't tolerate her. But I am absolutely in love with your Edward... aside from the too short temper.
| Comrade'sRoza chapter 29 . 9/11/2015
I am currently reading your story now and its great! But there's one thing I really need to get out is - Bella is being a bitch! A big one at that. I can understand that Edward cheating on her caused her a lot of pain but what he suffered for so many months... wasn't that penance enough? I mean, after listening to all the different ways he was tortured the only thing that she is sad about is that he cheated on her. And not to mention his family! All of them agree with her. Can't they see how he is suffering? ! Sorry, I really needed to rant a bit. I am pissed off at Bella. Anyways I love your fic!
| Snappher chapter 1 . 8/16/2015
Ouch! Poor dude. :(
| KDMCAM chapter 42 . 1/28/2015
I won't believe that she is dead but I do wonder why they didn't tell him that she is alive. Or is she in protective custody?
| KDMCAM chapter 41 . 1/28/2015
I only have 10 chapters left...that is still 10 chapters where the shit can still hit the fan! CRAP!