Reviews for Dear
Guest chapter 3 . 4/18/2013
Lol those two are just adorable! Please come back this story is awesome and so sweet
Princess Emma chapter 3 . 7/10/2012
Hehe this chapter made me giggle gotta admit I adore Vincent I just love how he hates Leaon teehee so I hope you update reeeeal soon
Shadow's Life Spand chapter 3 . 6/28/2012
This is so cute :D
superfan8 chapter 3 . 12/20/2011
Please continue this!
Floating Dandelion chapter 1 . 9/24/2011
Vincent? A dog? Yew serious?
Pocky1 chapter 3 . 9/16/2011
You are one fantastic writer! :D I absolutely adore this chapter, just like I did with the others :3 Hope to see more of those lovey-dovey moments and Cloud's victory in getting Leon to smile! O
AekoAeviAthan chapter 1 . 8/15/2011
Awe...Cloud is just too damn adorable. I love this story! Can't wait for your next update! Keep up with the awesome work!
Tearless chapter 2 . 8/9/2011
I really like reading your fanfic. Its really cute of cloud and leon being together. I hope that you would update on your stories regularly because its really good.
Just a person chapter 2 . 7/24/2011
Kawaii desu ne Leon is so handsome and Cloud is so cute. *sigh dreamily*
JacindaWeire chapter 2 . 7/3/2011
I love it! This story is so adorable! I can't wait for the next chapter. Is Cloud's dog based off of Vincent Valentine? (I love Vincent, but I bet he'll like be permanently between Leon and Cloud.) Please, update soon. :)
SuberXxXDuperXxXFunMachine chapter 2 . 6/30/2011
Well I think the basic concept and interactions between Leon and Cloud are extremly sweet and I like that.

I will try to offer some constructive critisism- please don't take offence, these are just thing I've noticed.

But it seems to me that in this chapter Cloud is portrayed as a weak character who is pretty much treated as a prize to be won in the competition. They didn't let him make his own descisions which made me annoyed at all the characters. Cloud seems to be naivee to the point of stupidity which is not endering and the overprotective way people treat him is bordering on offensive (to him) and futher highlights his weak character.

Lol, but never the less I still enjoyed this story and I hope to see Riku and Roxas regret their appaulingly prejudice actions- They were so mean without reason! This story has good potential to show how it is unjust for people to treat Leon differently just because of rumors when he has done nothing wrong, it was good how you set that up in the first paragraph of the fic. I reallly like the idea of the tough Leon being 'tamed' by Cloud, it's cute.

Will we hear more about Leon's 'hard life' that was mentioned earlier? I'm quite interested in that but it's cool either way.

well, can't wait to read more.

Chau
kitoriko chapter 2 . 6/26/2011
ahahahaha vincent as a pet? for reals? Lol XD

Aww...this chapter was so cute and sweet, I could just melt right now Lol
kitoriko chapter 1 . 6/26/2011
OMG! Cloud is so freaking cute and he's going out with Leon! THANK YOU! Lol XD

Yay, and I love it that cloud has two over-protective friends, I know I would be XD
Vanilla Heartstrife chapter 2 . 6/24/2011
Oh My, this chapter is... wow. It's really fun to read

What else can I say than how amazing this are?

You did a great job on this chapter, thank you, and thank you as well to HannahDJA who help Kusanagi Hikari
SquallyWally chapter 2 . 6/24/2011
lol you make Leon a really interesting character in here. It's funny that he got this tough side outside but also a crazy side inside of him. But I think you make Leon a cool character, I mean, he really does often speak in his mind (You saw it in Dissidia right?)

And Cloud he's... well, he really is OOC, but who cares! He's adorable and cute, and that's all that matter. Somehow, it clearly shown who's the seme and who's the uke, isn't it? Haha

The story is interesting, and funny as well :) And I can't wait for the next chpater and see what does you mean by HOW naive Cloud is, and mostly about Leon will came to Cloud's house? Maybe they'll do their first kiss? Kyaaaa!

Anyway, thank you for this. Update soon
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