Reviews for Not what they wanted, just Harry
Darklightningstorm chapter 13 . 2/26
I'm quite enjoying this, so I hope you come back to it one day.
Lady Saorsie Baldwin chapter 2 . 2/12
actually, you know how we all though that the librarians name was 'Prince'? well, heh, it's not. I got one of the 'Hogwarts library' books and it said that the librarians name was 'PINCE'. With out the 'R'. Heh, yeah! Well. Have fun changing it!
Cztelnik chapter 13 . 12/18/2017
I like Snape and Minerva are appropriately adult and doing a bit better job of monitoring the students under their care. The idea of 17 year old students mingling with 11 year olds and only having one Head of House to manage them (fellow student prefects don't count) is frightening. Very few parents would allow their children to attend such a boarding school nowadays with such a low number of adults to students.

Severus isn't so extremely oc as to allow Harry to be a teachers pet but they're doing a decent job of mentoring. A good old fashioned angsty fic.
bluedog44 chapter 1 . 11/29/2017
I wouldn't be surprised if it was better than Hermione's
Great first chapter!
Anna chapter 3 . 10/20/2017
Well, I wanted to like this, but your Snape is a complete moron. I can't stand a stupid Snape, because that is so wildly out of character.
Lady Rebell-K Malfoy chapter 1 . 10/1/2017
Wow! This story is so good! I know it's been four years since you last updated but I hope you will finish it! I really like the added persona of Salazar... and also, for the relationship with Severus, I wonder if it would not be benificial for him to begin to call Harry by his name and not Potter... I know he is reluctant to show that he cares, but he must eventually.
Snowy Analia chapter 13 . 8/7/2017
Thanks for writing this story its very good. I really enjoyed reading it.
azulkan2 chapter 13 . 6/11/2017
Great story. Would love to see it continued.
Serpent91 chapter 13 . 3/14/2017
Well written indeed!
LtsHrIt4ThBoyz chapter 13 . 2/12/2017
Hi! I just wanted to take a moment to say how very much I've enjoyed discovering this truly engaging tale and to implore you to continue/finish it when time permits; you have been granted a great gift and that, even though you may be pursuing a more mundane (i.e. 'lucrative') future path, your talent and obvious enjoyment for creative writing should not be denied! I realize that my anxiety for your not abandoning writing as an avocation is, indeed, slightly selfish, but I do hate to see such a shining light dim, and go out; it's a tragedy not to be borne!
I hope this finds you well and doing well at 'uni'.
Do take care and come back when you can.
Thank you for a most delightful read!
Sincerely,
MelJ
mackiechandler chapter 13 . 11/21/2016
This story is great. Snape is working for me and Harry is adorable. Please continue writing.
Cinthya chapter 13 . 11/8/2016
Ow, i want potter protecting neville in a fight, or somethingat sometime, like when he was falling, just to lost it and punch ron...
Dragon of Yin and Yang chapter 13 . 8/17/2016
Fantastic story! Can't wait for the next chapter.
Moriarty.Sherlock chapter 2 . 8/2/2016
Chapter 6? Where is 15?
10leckersley chapter 13 . 5/28/2016
Please finish that was really good xxx please finish x I WANT TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT :( ;(
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