Reviews for Emancipation |
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Saissa chapter 43 . 5/24 Lets see - 15 years 15 Years 30 years - so Ronnie must be at least 60 years old by the time of the last paragraph! Molly and Arthur really should have DISOWNED him years ago! Great story. I thoroughly enjoyed this one! |
paulieandgilbert chapter 41 . 1/22 What? If their teams were ordered to use deadly force, why keep Voldy alive? It makes no sense! Also, 'wide awake potion?' really? Not very imaginative. This had great potential but the execution leaves so much to be desired. This story is so choppy, it's near impossible to identify with any of these characters. Not the best. |
paulieandgilbert chapter 18 . 1/21 I'm confused. Why did Hermione freely give Dumbledork so much information? If she's in with Harry's group, was this part of an established plan? Didn't Harry want Dumbledork left uninformed for as long as possible? As good as this story is, it often feels somewhat clunky, like there's little bits of information missing throughout the story, leaving me feeling like I'm continuously playing catch-up. I hope it smoothes out in future chapters. |
Theresa Linge chapter 43 . 7/17/2021 Barring Luna and tiny bits of Hermione, feel zero empathy for any of these characters. Forced ships equals strained plot devices - always bad thing - and added to poorly researched info dumps? Not cool and alienates potential readers. Three out of ten |
Animago chapter 43 . 7/17/2021 Eu queria ver o filho snarry! T.T |
Animago chapter 38 . 7/17/2021 Aposto que Dumbledore vai facilitar os planos do Voldemort. |
Animago chapter 37 . 7/17/2021 Vai dar merda Depois dessa vou procurar uma fanfic em que Draco é ancorado ou protegido pelos weasleys, embora aceite qualquer coisa sobre draco e os weasleys. |
Animago chapter 35 . 7/17/2021 Ler essa fanfic é como comer um sanduíche, as vezes o excesso do molho escorre no lado. |
Animago chapter 30 . 7/17/2021 Falta quinze capítulos e nenhum filho! |
Animago chapter 21 . 7/16/2021 "É pelos olhos dos outros que reconhecemos nós mesmos" |
Animago chapter 20 . 7/16/2021 Harry Canon teria talento para dramatização se esforçasse suficiente. |
Animago chapter 19 . 7/16/2021 Imediatamente conclui desde o primeiro capítulo que a história é incrível, logo, pensei na possibilidade da mpreg ser a cereja do bolo. Homem, eu não estava errada! |
Artemis Scamander chapter 42 . 6/19/2021 Keeping Voldemort alive and just under the draught of the living death is just waiting for a disaster. It's like knowing Pennywise will eventually come back. |
Artemis Scamander chapter 31 . 6/18/2021 I get Severus and Harry. Although Minerva being appealed to Harry's butt is just weird. |
Revenah chapter 43 . 5/21/2021 Absolutely magnificent story, such a pleasure to read and enjoy! |