Reviews for Let the Sunrise in the Morning Give Its Light
Lara783 chapter 1 . 5/21/2011
This is just beautiful. I love that you wrote it in second person, and I love the little details that help paint the big picture-the English pub, the slide of Booth's hand across her abdomen-it's just beautiful. I am heading to check out your other stories right now! Thank you for sharing!
Liria247 chapter 1 . 5/21/2011
I like this. It's well-written and, for the most part, very true to character.

My only issue is your math on the pregnancy. It takes three-ish days just for the sperm to get to the egg, another 4 before the egg implants, and a week after that (around the time a woman realizes that she's missed her period) for the hormones to be detectable by a lab test. Home pregnancy tests don't detect it until at least 3 days after that. just FYI
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