Reviews for If At First
firedawg chapter 10 . 5/2
Brilliant story, hope to read more.
Dogco94 chapter 10 . 4/19
Great story. Can't wait for more!
Calmzone1 chapter 10 . 3/22
really want to see where you take this. Well done
David M. Potter chapter 10 . 2/27
Brilliant story!
wiredawgman chapter 10 . 11/23/2015
Great story. I wish you would finish it, it has a really interesting plot and is a neat interpretation of the challenge. Fantastic work!
redwolf23456 chapter 10 . 10/8/2015
Great story so far
Jonathan Palmer chapter 10 . 8/3/2015
Please update. I really want to know what happens next.
Saissa chapter 2 . 6/18/2015
I would take Hermione off the list, but the rest are true friends to Harry.
Hermione is a fair weather friend - she is NOT terribly loyal.
In GOF, both she and Ron thought that harry put his name in the goblet when we all know he did not. But then again - this is year 3, not year 4.
MeinGimli chapter 10 . 4/17/2015
what happened to this fine Story? its now more then 15 months since your last update.

i want to know what weaselbee and the dragon are going to do
X chapter 8 . 3/28/2015
In the UK they go to the cinema to watch a film. The word 'movie' is an American derivation of 'moving picture', although 'movie' has been somewhat adopted there.
26Naruto26 chapter 2 . 3/27/2015
The story loses all its appeal when Harry tells Hermione... Hermione makes the stories feel like your watching a puppet show and Harry is the puppet..
1sunfun chapter 10 . 3/6/2015
ray74656 chapter 10 . 2/28/2015
Great story. Next chapter please.
omh666 chapter 10 . 1/29/2015
This is a damn fine story. Hopefully you'll be continuing it when you're able.
corwyn chapter 10 . 1/17/2015
thanks for sharing the story so far. i'm enjoying it.
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