|Reviews for Touch|
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/20/2013
| angel897 chapter 1 . 12/15/2012
hot love it
| ExAmoreDolorem chapter 1 . 11/10/2012
*sighs* what a sexy and sweet story :)
| SnowWhite23 chapter 1 . 8/5/2012
| Brookie66 chapter 1 . 7/7/2012
Pretty good continue
| where she went chapter 1 . 7/29/2011
| LovinglyEnchanted chapter 1 . 7/21/2011
Wow! This was extremely well written! Well Done!
I particularly enjoyed that you took your time building up the climax. Quick, hot sex does NOT mean one should write a short, undetailed story - which is the case for many writers on this website; yet you are one of the few who have managed to control yourself and write a beautiful piece! Kudos!
Hermione and Severus are one of my favourite pairings; if you were to continue this/ create an entire story around it, I would DEFINITELY read it.
I look forward to reading your other stories.
Don't stop writing!
| LoveHGSS chapter 1 . 7/16/2011
Beautifully written! I was a little bummed when I got to the end because I was hoping for a never-ending story, but alas... This was just wonderful. I loved that Severus took her and laid her down on a bed once he realized Hermione was a virgin. So sweet! Loved this!
| Dream4ever5683 chapter 1 . 6/11/2011
Not bad a little short and lacking some details but very good word play especialy the whole liquid obsidian bit I give it a 7/10
| gnrkrystle chapter 1 . 5/24/2011
hot1 just wish i knew how they got together!
| evil-vile-kitty chapter 1 . 5/24/2011
I rather enjoyed this! The detail was great and it was all just so...PASSIONATE! This should definitely be turned into a story. I know I'd read it!
|Alexa1993 chapter 1 . 5/22/2011|