Reviews for Broken Fairytale
Intoxicated-Eyes chapter 1 . 7/13/2011
Lovedd this. :]
centralperks chapter 1 . 6/2/2011
This was lovely, Dra! I've never read a DominiqueLysanderLorcan, but it was great. It was angsty, but it was also bittersweet, in a way. I liked Lysander in this, and although your Dominique is very different from mine, I really liked her. She was perfect.

The Broken Fairytale them you had going on was great, I loved it! There were a few grammar errors, but nothing major. Great work!

Bri
folie a plusieurs chapter 1 . 5/23/2011
I really love the angst and heart break of this fic :D Wonderful job, dear. Also, the 'broken fairytale' part is my favorite part of it :D

A little nit-picking: I noticed you started new paragraphs while the same characters where speaking/thinking. You shouldn't do that unless there's more than four sentences in the paragraph, as it gets confusing.

Other than that, I loved this :D Wonderful job Dra!