Reviews for Dance With The Devil
Guest chapter 30 . 1/23
Ehmmm well hay !
I find your story really great. It is so toching and I really like your way of thinking about god devil and humans. Your way of wirting your story ares great! YOUR STORYLINE SHOULD BE A REAL BOOK! and believe it or not but i would buy it even it could have some improvements i really liked
If you want hear more about my opine , mail me
Lg niroha
PS: i am sorry if i made some spelling and grammer mistakes. I am still in the learning phase
Hitomi Of The Sand chapter 30 . 6/18/2014
i love this fic so much!
Hitomi Of The Sand chapter 26 . 6/18/2014
Hitomi Of The Sand chapter 19 . 6/17/2014
Hitomi Of The Sand chapter 17 . 6/17/2014
aw sasusaku XD
Hitomi Of The Sand chapter 11 . 6/17/2014
poor naruto!
Hitomi Of The Sand chapter 9 . 6/17/2014
love the sasusaku part
Hitomi Of The Sand chapter 1 . 6/17/2014
lol religion bashing sounds awesome! i'm satanic lol (JK) his should be interesting.
Zentari2238 chapter 30 . 5/21/2014
A couple of problems here: this is not naruto, this is a fic using the character's names in a totally unrelated fashion to make some asinine story.
draco122 chapter 30 . 5/19/2014
overall this was a great story a lot of fun to read and thanks for the advice i really needed it.
draco122 chapter 19 . 5/19/2014
this is cute and so far anyone that is offended is a fool
winddemon199 chapter 19 . 5/17/2014
I like this story. and just so you know I agree with what you say in your author notes at the top just so you know I use to be a christian but now I'm an agnostic. I do kinda believe in god but I kinda don't I'm in the middle and if there is a god like in one of the other reviews I don't think he'd want us to worship him. I do agree about the God, adam, eve and the devil part don't believe or agree everything you hear even from your pastor have your own opinion
WOLF TITAN chapter 1 . 12/10/2013
I still like this story I wish you could make more of them
Anime Fan 295647 chapter 12 . 12/9/2012
cool i loved it
Vador chapter 3 . 10/17/2012
Ok I clicked cause I was bored don't know if I like it or not yet, but what was with the sins. I mean if your going to spend a chapter describing them at least do it accurately. Or if not accurately try to give the difference a relevance to the story.
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