Reviews for Desperation
Alucard chapter 4 . 12/22/2014
I will not rape them ill just toy with them drain their blood slowly then leave however so far the story is good IDE love to know if my master falls for me or not
TheAnon chapter 4 . 4/10/2014
:3 ish happy with fanfiction so far. AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH FANGIRLING SO HARD! I don't know why I just like weal alucard around integra!
F.maiden chapter 4 . 1/5/2014
I think you were looking for a punishment.. that almost sounded like that would be a reward for some... lol
Aservis Roturier chapter 2 . 12/3/2012
L believe you've captured what Integra's reaction to such a situation would be quite accurately. She's a cerebral character, not physical. Physically she does nearly nothing but draw into a ball...it's probably what i'd do too, and spend some time meditating on the ramifications, get the name calling done and out of the way to make room for whatever life was going to amount to from then on.

Alucard seems in character as well. I would guess that would be one of the few times he would show some alarm. And he knows Integra well enough not to rag her mercilessly about it as he does Seras. Just a touch of smirk to keep his hand in the game. plenty of time for that kind of nonsense later. They have forever now, after all. Well done. Count this as a review for both ch 1 & 2. The words are well polished. I really didn't see anything to complain of (and considering I normally give quite accurate, thorough critiques that sometimes leave sloppy writers squealing in indignation, I suppose that's saying something) so well done.

I've read a few of your introspective pieces on Kuroshitsuji and loved them but hesitated to critique after having read your bio. There really wasn't anything to do but appreciate them. I was hungry for something meatier than a mood piece and now it looks as though I've found that. Looking forward to the rest.-Roturier
INCOGNITO chapter 1 . 7/8/2012
i wont say my name...
that aurthor ID picture it's mellow from death note isnt it.
greate story by the way.
julialuster9 chapter 4 . 6/20/2012
I love it and its sweet what alucard said to sir hellsing it makes me want to love again hehehe thank you for the author who wrote this romanic story heheh you awsome hehe
julialuster9 chapter 4 . 6/20/2012
I love it and its sweet what alucard said to sir hellsing it makes me want to love again hehehe thank you for the author who wrote this romanic story heheh you awsome hehe
hellsingfan101 chapter 4 . 1/27/2012
This is a good read, I hope you continue. The only thing I recommend would be to make the chapters a little longer, it's stila great story though don't get me wrong
NerdChick chapter 4 . 11/17/2011
That doesnt sound to bad idk why im reviewing. I LOVE THE STORY THATS WHY WRIGHT MORE MORE MORE!

ROSES ARE RED

VOILETS ARE BLUE

WRIGHT MORE ON THIS STORY

OR ALUCARD WILL RAPE YOU!
la-novh94 chapter 4 . 10/23/2011
ok first of all I loved this chapter

Please pray now continues the story

something about this episode was very small with no more to say

is that English is not their native language so can not say if you have a failure writing (why use a google translator)
Remulin chapter 4 . 8/6/2011
Nice chapter, the intimacy was enjoyable to read.

I just watched OVA 8 (so heart-wrenching, and epic). TT
Starlight0208 chapter 4 . 8/2/2011
Can i just review to say i'm not reviewing and want to take the raping anyway? LMAO! But a great twist, i love the story...now alucard? *beckons* xxx
Auteur-Onirique chapter 4 . 7/28/2011
I asked myself if I was going to leave a review... But finally, as Alucard can't cross open seas, I don't want to wait for him forever and I just leave you a review !

Well, that's quite a story ! I like the serious Alucard who doesn't hide the fact he's in love ! Please, continue this one ! )
zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz8910 chapter 4 . 7/26/2011
Great. Now I'M the one trembling. You made The Stoic cry. Are you happy now, Chaos-sama?

If you read the manga and saw the entirety of Alu-kun's last battle with the priest (can't remember nae at the moment, my apologies) it...actually isn't that OOC...YMMV is my best friend right now.
ninetalehollow chapter 4 . 7/19/2011
very nice, very nice indeed i love this story
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