Reviews for The Long Way Home |
---|
Fuyutsuki Kasumi chapter 10 . 2/25/2012 I really loved it! Nice job! :) |
shasa chapter 10 . 2/24/2012 I can't believe it's overrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr . I loved the ending. I LOVED IT YOU HEAR ME? It was just so perfect! Your descriptions, tenses, and writing are impeccable and inspiring! :) A couple things: "even after all this time and a fiancé sometimes she is still struck dumb by his looks;" um I don't think the sentence is grammatically wrong, but it's a little confusing. Maybe changing the structure would make it clearer? Idk. Just thought I should let you know. " But the Naruto's smile widens" I think you meant either the Hokage or Naruto. Haha " this is so much betterbecause" there should be a space between the better and because I believe. Sorry for the nitpicking...it's just what I do! It doesn't meant that I love your story any less! I hope that you continue writing in the future, and maybe even some more Sasusaku! Thank you so much for this lovely story :) -shasa |
xx chapter 10 . 2/24/2012 omg i loved this your writing, the descriptions, the characters were all so precious thank you so much |
Shinidama chapter 10 . 2/18/2012 Thank you for writing such wonderful story. |
LuthCi chapter 10 . 2/12/2012 "tadaima." and it's all i need to fave this fic. love it, great job :'D |
SoftWaifu chapter 10 . 2/9/2012 At first, i wasn't used to the writing style. But i decided to read it anyways, and i'm SOSOSO glad i did. THIS STORY IS SIMPLY FANTASTIC. OMFG. IT WAS PERFECCT. Please write more SasuSaku fanfics. 333 |
Deyoki chapter 10 . 2/9/2012 Oh my dear god! I can't find words to describe how amazing this story was! But I will say one thing, will Naruto end like this I'll be content for the rest of my life. Just perfect! |
Beckettsbabe09 chapter 10 . 1/31/2012 That was amazing! Just the pick me up I needed today. It was very well written. The best by far in stories with a similar plot bunny behind them. It was just perfect. I don't believe anyone was OOC and it all came together so perfectly at the end. Great job! |
Gerkyhen chapter 10 . 1/30/2012 This is perfect, and you are one of the most talented writers on the whole of this site :) |
mooimcute chapter 10 . 1/27/2012 ohmygawd. That was beautiful. :3 |
You are my Math chapter 1 . 1/21/2012 I regret it... I should have read this before 'cuz I can feel this story would be so awesome like any other stories too :) |
BelieveDreamsComeTrue chapter 10 . 1/19/2012 I'm going to hold you guilty if I don't pass my exam tomorrow! :D Just kidding! ;) The truht is I started reading this like, a few hours ago and I got attached to the laptop! This is the reason why I spend so much time on my computer! It's because there are people like you, out there, sharing their amazing stories and making us turn all mushy, angry, sad and happy at the same time! ;D Great, great story! Simply loved every minute of it! ;D P.S - Sorry for any mistakes in my English, it's just not my mother language! |
DivineKitten chapter 10 . 1/18/2012 Okay so I read this story due to the many reviews, so I thought might be interesting to read. In the end I had my eyes glued to the screen for almost 2 hours, shedding some tears here and there when I reached the end of it. This story is a masterpiece, I gotta tell you. No kidding. Just like the many reviewers said, you managed to keep the plot and characters in line, also the oh-so greatly detailed feelings of each individual is astonishing. Thank you so, so much for sharing your amazing work. Looking forward for more of your masterpieces! (preferably SasuSaku's :giggles:) XD |
JustALittleTwisted chapter 10 . 1/17/2012 That was just beautiful I loved the whole thing! |
DeeVee chapter 1 . 1/16/2012 Just finished your story and I absolutely love it! Great work :) |