Reviews for Voices
lydiamaartin chapter 1 . 6/25/2011
Gah! Why is this so angstyyyy, Idol twinny? Whyyyy? D:

/Pearl does not like angst O_O

/but Pearl loves your writing...

/Pearl is conflicted P

/Pearl will stop talking in third-person now ;)

ANYWHO. This was brilliant. I don't know how you did it, but you turned typical angst into honest-to-God tragedy, and it's so sad and awful, but you really made me feel for Molly, which is a good thing, sooo :) It was really amyzing, truly

Fantastic job, and keep writing!
ViviRidiAma chapter 1 . 6/4/2011
Oh my god. I feel like someone just hijacked my brain and put my thought into an -as you put it- angsty freeverse. And it's in a way that made me tear up and have to close my eyes for a minute. You are my new all-time favorite writer.
xxx-angelin-xxx chapter 1 . 6/4/2011
I can see that happening, especially in such a large family!

It was very well-written and sad, I really liked how you used the free-verse:)
clouds with silver linings chapter 1 . 5/29/2011
Mad, this was too beautiful! I have a strange love of Molly angst and this was great. I loved the flow of it and the line about being a terrible driver ;)

Don't let the voices get to you Maddykins, just beat them off with a baseball bat (I do :P) And I'm too lazy to log in on my phone! Fantabulous job Mad!

Heather Xxx
misswhiteblack chapter 1 . 5/27/2011
Oh Mad this is so angsty and it's just heartbreaking. It was so well written and the flow of it was just excellent. Poor Poor Molly. Her state of mind is obviously very fragile in this and she is in desperate need of some recognition, someone to save her. I really do feel for her in this and it was a wonderful conveyence of despair. Well done, Mad, it's gorgeous.
sidsaid chapter 1 . 5/25/2011
Madeline! This is beautifulllllll :D The imagery is PERFECT and this is brilliant.

Love you always! ;)
folie a plusieurs chapter 1 . 5/25/2011
This line:

"and sometimes you just want to

end it all

but no, you're not brave enough"

It hits close to home, for reasons you already know.

This is stunnglybeautiful&&heartbreaking&&fullofangst.

An it.

(and you :)

And you know what, everyone cares about you. Everyone. :)

So get rid of those voices, dear. :D

Love you!
symphonies of you chapter 1 . 5/23/2011
Wow. I love the angst in this. I love how all your characters in your stories express so much emotion, and I like how those same emotions are evoked in me too because it helps me write. Good job! I love Molly's character too; she has a lot to live up to.
renzhie chapter 1 . 5/22/2011

this was breathtakingly sad. It was beautiful, heartbreaking, and alive.

I love you, Mad.

**those three words are said too much, but not enough.
BlueEyes444 chapter 1 . 5/22/2011
Mad, I love you to pieces and never forget that, okay?

And if you ever wanna rant or rave or e a good laugh or have a cyber shoulder to cry on, I'm always here for you.

Now, hkirtlhlsdkfhskledf!

First, I'll ignore how much I want to burst into heaving sobs and move on.

Holy heck, Mad This was so beautiful and so epic and so haunting and I'm. Freaking. Blown. Away. In. The. . Of. This.
stilessttilinski chapter 1 . 5/22/2011
This was breathtaking, Mad.

I love your characterisation of Molly - not important enough or good enough, a bite in the apple, etc.

This was absolutely beautiful.

tunystark chapter 1 . 5/22/2011
awhh mad this was... beautiful...

you don't need to feel like that, we'ree all here for you3
kingslayers chapter 1 . 5/22/2011
I'm going to try ignore how sad the little bit at the end made me. Not the friends bit, the part about you.

Okay. Reviewing normally.

I loved it. You captured the emotions perfectly ( so) and you could believe it.

I'm wondering why Rose wasn't included in the everyoneelseisbetter part, and I loved that Molly sees that Dominique is evil.

I loved this:

and you're just a whisper

fragile, could be beautiful, rd

It's gorgeous. It reminds me of Invisible by Taylor Swift, yet it's original.

This was a wonderful piece of writing.

I'm always here to listen, Madderbear. I promise I'll always listen, and I'll try to be as there for you as I can, and I resent RL for getting in the way of that.

You're gorgeous.

An aimyzhieing person.

One of the best friends I'll ever have.

Jane xx

P. S. Never forget xx
chkn chapter 1 . 5/22/2011
Madeline, I love you. There, now I can complete my review, I like it, a lot. Angst or no angst it's lovely, as always your writing leaves me speachless!
thelilacfield chapter 1 . 5/22/2011
So sad... :'(

I didn't know you wrote sad stuff, Mad

But this was really good. Amyzhieing stuff. The best kind of angst :)