Reviews for Never Give In
eltigre221 chapter 12 . 4/3/2013
eheheh ahh today is a great day, two of my all time favorite fanfics were updated on the same DAY! :D awesome chapter, question will you ever use the things I suggested before, about the carbon shields, the electronics paint jobs, and the holoforms? :D well until another awesome chapter, later and have fun writing :)
tiedwithribbons chapter 12 . 4/3/2013
Love it, love it, LOVE IT!

By the way, could you please update An Allspark Wish soon?
Meganlauraxxx chapter 11 . 3/20/2013
liliCartMan chapter 8 . 12/20/2012
"It was actually a good look for him, he was definitely a lot more handsome and civilised looking now" who know? maybe also to attract Optimus and Valour?
Please please make SS and somebody else come in! Something tells me that Starscream is laughing a little for Megatron's loss (a potential new heir has disappeared, and it's a bad hit for SS's "rival"... mah, maybe Screamer's not so sadic); but also being so angry because Megatron's still the leader, and that the loss hasn't impaired his abilities (if Megatron was hardly depressed SS could say "Megatron is destroing himself with feelings and is uncapable to lead the Decepticons: I, Starscream, am the new leader!"
Guest chapter 11 . 12/13/2012
Will the elite guard find them
THENIGHT-1 chapter 11 . 12/2/2012
I hope you continue this fic, it's got great potential!
Guest chapter 11 . 9/27/2012
Is there another chapter for this story?
KashiEuroDrake chapter 11 . 9/23/2012
Ironhide's Girl 103 chapter 11 . 9/18/2012
That'a got to hurt the helm if you ask me. Optimus sparkling sounds so cute that everyone likes him and so do I.
liliCartMan chapter 1 . 9/17/2012
oh oh Optimus raped by Megatron, before they crashed on the Earth? what a story! it could be IC for Megatron, think that anyway a rape is always a very violent action, it could be IC (I don't know how to tell it differently) between enemy soldiers, and between soldiers and prisoners. If I think that Sassbrat described megatron as a Mech that didn't believe in the utility of raping enemies, in his/her FF "Truths"...
Will our heroes help Optimus in making his son grow well? will Megatron do anything to reach Optimus and take Valour back to raise the little one as a Decepticon? It could be a good side plot for the series, maybe: in any moment, Optimus could try to hide Valour from his team maybe because he's ashamed (it could be IC for TFA Optimus), he could be pregnant at the beginning of the series, and both he and Valour could remain "frozen", in stasis for 50 years on the Earth. So that Optimus could be still pregnant on the Earth and bore Valour in any moment.
Or Valour could develop in Optimus's body during the 50 years stasis, maybe (the author/autors could invent any bological mechanism to explain this, see in "Different Pebbles" by Decepticon Chick), remeining alive, and could be born on the Earth so that they could meet Blackarachnia.
Eeeeh I myself would have liked BA to join the Autobots, also in the original series!
bah, my usula game in uniting FFs to the original series...
Guest chapter 11 . 9/16/2012
Wicked! Is there another chapter for this story?
cheesybeans chapter 11 . 9/15/2012
Thank you so much for the update.
JazzNProwl's sparklingAriaFyre chapter 11 . 9/15/2012
Lmao Sucker. Lol. Fail Optimus.
rel95 chapter 11 . 9/15/2012
Great Chapter! I think you should make Megatron less mean.
Jovianokami chapter 11 . 9/14/2012
I'm so glad things look like they are going to work out between Optimus and Elita. I hope Valour can bring them together. Perhaps Optimus will be able to find a way to return her back or make her look just like Herself in the G1 series.

Oh, no. I like the idea of Megatron being bad and coming after Opitmus will everything he has. Please don't change that.
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